Redeeming Our Time
etheree poem (see notes)13 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Pat,
This write has the perfect word count and appealing shape. It calls attention to areas of our lives that need improvement. Time well spent lasts for eternity. Well penned. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Pat,
This write has the perfect word count and appealing shape. It calls attention to areas of our lives that need improvement. Time well spent lasts for eternity. Well penned. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review,
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your etheree poem about the gift of time. It is important to spend it on positive things and not waste the little bit of time we are given,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your etheree poem about the gift of time. It is important to spend it on positive things and not waste the little bit of time we are given,
~patty~
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Patty.
Comment from mermaids
This is a lovely poem that reminds the reader how precious our time is. We never think of the amount of seconds that are given to us. You have a smooth flow of words and lines with a strong spiritual feel to them.
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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This is a lovely poem that reminds the reader how precious our time is. We never think of the amount of seconds that are given to us. You have a smooth flow of words and lines with a strong spiritual feel to them.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, mermaids.
