Comment from irishauthorme

Exceptional

The logistics conform and do not conform, which is the reason that they make sense. The familiar path is the one that hides the most from us. In spite of all we learn, all we know, all we forget, when we reach that certain "Age of Reflection" we cannot help looking back even if we are not going that way.
Como no?
iiish

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017

Thanks again for helping me to understand these pieces. I've had a lot of people questioned me on the last verse and I told them that it is our exponential rate ever dancing technologically that made me State 330 then 300

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

I read reviews again and contemplate the meeting then mean more to me now than I ever have before thanks for your extended words of wisdom

Comment from B.B. Rose

Excellent

Well, I thought about your conclusion and, as a writer, I believe we all are our stories --- where we've been and what we've done. But due to the ever sifting and twisting of memory, that opens up all kinds of realities and stories. So, I vote for lots. But only this one time shot.

Thanks, that was a simple work with lots to digest.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks, I really appreciate your specific perspective. Your review had an eerie similarity to a poem in my portfolio titled, "To Measure the Rhyme of Frozen Time"

"everything was subtly shifting
just like the dunes of sand,
Father Time is slowly sifting
these realities through
his heavy
hand"

I really appreciate your comments, You give me a bit to digest . . .

Blessings,
Brother Badger < : - D >~

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Darren, this could mean the trips someone took or the mental "trips" I have an idea which it is, but physical travel also contributes to "where I am."" I like cryptic penning. Thanks for sharing. Blessings for serenitY Trisha

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thank you so much I really appreciate you stopping by and I really appreciate your warm kind comments interview. Blessings, Darren

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Thanks again for your encouragement, friendship, and continued support ~

Darren

reply by Bucketlist on 18-Jul-2018

Likewise, it?s reciprical! I?m behind in reviewing as usual!

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Everything you have done and every place you have gone, has led you to where you are right now. Very well done is short pieces, one leading into the other.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for your continued support, your warm reviews.
Is a pleasure and an honor to write with you here Barb.
Blessings, Darren

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I do not know where you want to be, nor do I know where you have been, but this one thing I do know. What we are today is largely made up of the things we have done and the things we have seen and endured. I do know had it not been the trial I have faced and have successfully survived, that have made me the caring person I am. Patricia

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017

Excellent uplifting input.
I really appreciate your perspective I knew time to reflect on my Haiku sweet blessings brother Bagent

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

Lovely 5/7/5 combinations which flow together very well
The path of life does definitely take us to the culmintion of all we have said and done
This works fine as a haiku but your insights into human nature would certainly create sme wonderful senryu
Blessings
Have a smily day

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017

Thank you so much Smiley you made me smile today I love your perspective.
And I really appreciate the direction toward the center of you I've never done it before I will study and discover that exciting new poetry form.
Blessings, brother badger

reply by smileycloud on 08-Nov-2017

::))

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's a good conclusion. To me, it speaks of considering all the past experiences and charting future ones, that it really isn't any different because your own soul is the compass and you seem comfortable in your own mind's map.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by and share your thoughts I really appreciate your perspective on my work. As always an honor and pleasure to write with you here. Obviously more to come again has burst again. Entered blessings brother badger

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

A most complex and thoroughly intriguing thought sequence and travel
quandary conveyed here. Though I am not familiar with your work yet,
but I follow your concept most affirmingly, and your last phase,
an inevitable and truly brilliant conclusion.
Thanks for sharing...
Best wishes, Ronni

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by.
A pleasure and an honor to read and write with you here. Thank you so much for your uplifting comment I am very pleased that you found this inclusion to be brilliant. Your kind comments brightens my day and I appreciate it blessings, brother badger