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Haiku and Senryu Suites

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Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites

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Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
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Fantastic picture that really illustrates what you are trying to say.
The haunting refrains that linger make us think of the possibilities of reincarnation and all that the past remains and influences what we are now.
Great stuff!
irish

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the shining review and your birthday kind comments. I didn't think that picture was particularly suitable I did not only hinted at someone looking in the mirror but I realize it but it also other things you're talking about like reincarnation.
    So pleased that you enjoyed this cryptic message.
    Thanks for the wonderful review. Entered blessings brother badger
Comment from mermaids
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I am glad you are back to writing and posting. When I have writer's block which is frequently, I often take a group of words from the dictionary or I take a walk out into nature and make a list of themes for poems. Excellent haiku that says much especially the line "a name without frame".

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    Thanks again I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my Haiku. When I get writer's block I come up with the concept and start with Haiku after I developed this Haiku I developed the poem that you reviewed previously against of yesterday tomorrow along the same thing.
    Blessings brother
Comment from smileycloud
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yes
I do believe you definitely do "have to" write
you inspire so well with yur deep and meaningful insights like this one
indeed, we need to search after our true self identity by knowing how to improve upon the past
have a smiley day
blessings

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much for your continued support my day is made more Smiley because of you.
    Blessings Darren
Comment from Bucketlist
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Auguste Rodin THE THINKER " I think, therefore I am," gives us a an idea. We shift with time and circumstance. It's not easy to say who we are in past, present, future. But with the physical state of being it's easier,. I know I'm not who or where I used to be . I am at a better place in myself now, and plan on holding on to those acceptable states in the future. Unless of course, I've left the planet.
I enkjoy your penning, it always makes me think.

Trisha, welcome back!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Thanks so much for your thoughtful review Trisha I love your reference to Rodin.
    It's great to be back and riding again and it's wonderful to get one of your great reviews I have Polished in a bit I messed up on some of the words anyway I have everything but thank you so much for the review.
    Blessings brother badger
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    You were, are, and will be welcome
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    You were, are, and will be welcome
reply by Bucketlist on 07-Nov-2017
    You were, are, and will be welcome
Comment from patcelaw
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Bill, we often wonder what we are and why we are here. It is good to know you are writing again as you write some wonderful poetry. Patricia

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Thank- you so much for the goog review. It is good to be back.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a question from philosophy, who the poet was, what was his name, what was he without a name or before giving him a name or a name without a frame; I liked.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    Thank- you so much for the goog review. It is good to be back.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
    This is a prelude to more to come~~
    I really appreciate your continued support.