Daisy Chain
A picture this challenge poem28 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Christine,
A wonderfully imaginative take on the Picture This challenge this week. A topic most of us can relate to, I think.
Super job. Thank you!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
  |
Christine,
A wonderfully imaginative take on the Picture This challenge this week. A topic most of us can relate to, I think.
Super job. Thank you!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Robyn, Thanks for reading my challenge poem A little different with the mono- rhyme style butthis is how it came out so I will go with it LOL Cheers always Christine
Comment from Mark Valentine
Great poem, Christine. I love the insight that we all have cracks, but we can choose to mend them or to let them enlarge. I like the aaaa bbbb cccc rhyme scheme. this was a great meditation with which to start a day - thanks.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
Great poem, Christine. I love the insight that we all have cracks, but we can choose to mend them or to let them enlarge. I like the aaaa bbbb cccc rhyme scheme. this was a great meditation with which to start a day - thanks.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Mark. Thanks for reading my poem for this image challenge. Yes I did a mono- rhyme style it just hppened in the first stanza and I kept this theoughout seemed to fit my meaasge. I love these challenges males ones grey matter work harder Cheers and great to hear from you Christine
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nicely written poem for the Picture This challenge. You used very good wording that went so well with the picture. Great job. I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
This is a very nicely written poem for the Picture This challenge. You used very good wording that went so well with the picture. Great job. I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Teri. Many thanks for your review and I am glad you did read it and send me your thoughts appreciated big time Chers Christine
Comment from jenintorre
Hi Chrissy.
A well written poem, I enjoyed reading it. And well chosen illustration. The advice you give is very good especially with small cracks but maybe harder with big ones. Cheers jen.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
Hi Chrissy.
A well written poem, I enjoyed reading it. And well chosen illustration. The advice you give is very good especially with small cracks but maybe harder with big ones. Cheers jen.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi jen, Thanks very much for reading my poem and taking the time to give it a review. keep all the small cracks small and let the daisies grow Cheers Christine
Comment from royowen
I rather like the poetic ability you bring into play here Christine. Yes I think we all walk around with self designed mask, trying to hide our incumbent weaknesses, afraid to make vulnerable our soft underside. Beautifully written in articulate smooth flowing iambic pentameter and aabb rhyming, excellent job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
I rather like the poetic ability you bring into play here Christine. Yes I think we all walk around with self designed mask, trying to hide our incumbent weaknesses, afraid to make vulnerable our soft underside. Beautifully written in articulate smooth flowing iambic pentameter and aabb rhyming, excellent job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Roy. As usual your positive commetns gladden my heart and I feel privilaged to have you as my friend here on fS and value your comments for my work I enjoyed this challenge Cheers Christine x
-
Well done Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and a great interpretation of the picture this challenge. Deep within our hearts we have good seeds that wait to come forth and cannot wait to shine through us.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
A very well-written poem and a great interpretation of the picture this challenge. Deep within our hearts we have good seeds that wait to come forth and cannot wait to shine through us.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Sandra, Yes I do believe that we are all good underneath despite the shells we may put up Thos omage just allowed me to express my thoughts and so pleased to have your comments Have a lovely day Sandra Cheers Christine
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well stated, Christine, and I loved the metaphorical comparisons of cracks in concrete or pavement to the cracks and fissures that can take form in our false, faux facades of fortitude.
Most of us are not as "hard" as we might appear to be. It's a wall we put up to keep people at arm's length.
Unless WE decide to let them in, of course.
Well done...
~Dean
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
Well stated, Christine, and I loved the metaphorical comparisons of cracks in concrete or pavement to the cracks and fissures that can take form in our false, faux facades of fortitude.
Most of us are not as "hard" as we might appear to be. It's a wall we put up to keep people at arm's length.
Unless WE decide to let them in, of course.
Well done...
~Dean
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Dean Thanks for your insightful review for my poem and I do not believe for one moment you are hard. I think a big softie underneath LOL I am glad you let us in here on FS Cheers for your support and comments Christine
-
You're very welcome, Christine.~Dean :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the "Pix" challenge. I enjoyed the sentiment of your piece, and as I struggle to write my own poem, I was impressed with how easily your piece flowed,
~patty~
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
|
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the "Pix" challenge. I enjoyed the sentiment of your piece, and as I struggle to write my own poem, I was impressed with how easily your piece flowed,
~patty~
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
-
Hi Patty, Thanks for your review and this time it did flow quote easily but have had tomes when ai have struggled to get everything flowing well ( I am sure I Am not alone in this ) Cheers Christine
