FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from mkflood
Notice God never said anything about her having a headache.wink..i do thank you for selecting my work. Honestly I forgotten all about this one. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Good job and thanks again.. MKFlood
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Notice God never said anything about her having a headache.wink..i do thank you for selecting my work. Honestly I forgotten all about this one. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Good job and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks nature of true or real love, as it is evident in Adam and Eve; love is expressed so lovely, as Adam tells Eve the apple of eye, love is inseparable, forever and eternal; I liked.
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This speaks nature of true or real love, as it is evident in Adam and Eve; love is expressed so lovely, as Adam tells Eve the apple of eye, love is inseparable, forever and eternal; I liked.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is clever but the first line doesn't rhyme with lines two and three which is a requirement of the competition.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
This is clever but the first line doesn't rhyme with lines two and three which is a requirement of the competition.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
