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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello and reconciled
You certainty do have a salad of words
I see you are referring to (Cinderella humor )
which I don't understand what it is
But one thing I know how you dressed your
Salad of words with a humorous dressing
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hello and reconciled
You certainty do have a salad of words
I see you are referring to (Cinderella humor )
which I don't understand what it is
But one thing I know how you dressed your
Salad of words with a humorous dressing
Gert
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Hi...Gert....-smile-
I'm referring to first the absurdness her sisters saw her as.....
second from her story every Cinderellas no chance triumph.
well I havent read it for a while but I'm recalling a bittersweet taste....wherever the song goes...so do I.
I write when I have I time to sink...to relax,,,escape maybe for a second, sometimes to capture a memory, hope , dream at its essence. but I do it on call on the spot and release the same. anyway ...I'm always Michael
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Hello Michael
You take care and as you say
I write when I have I time to sink (think)...to relax,,,escape maybe for a second, sometimes to capture a memory, hope , dream at its essence. but I do it on call on the spot and release the same. anyway
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Smile....more or less
Comment from closetpoetjester
Your auditorium could never be empty, my friend. But through your elusive verse I see a myriad of emotions in here and a very sad and tragic underlying story if my perceptions are correct. I'm so sorry you've suffered. Everything you've been through has moulded you into who you are and got you to where you sit right now. If that's a bad place, I'm sorry...writing is cathartic, but I feel you know that already. Stay strong.
Don't ever stop being you-nique X
Sassometer
x
PS For a minute I thought the "groundsman" was well...you know haha. Wishful thinking *wink*
Hey, if the shoe fits...
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Your auditorium could never be empty, my friend. But through your elusive verse I see a myriad of emotions in here and a very sad and tragic underlying story if my perceptions are correct. I'm so sorry you've suffered. Everything you've been through has moulded you into who you are and got you to where you sit right now. If that's a bad place, I'm sorry...writing is cathartic, but I feel you know that already. Stay strong.
Don't ever stop being you-nique X
Sassometer
x
PS For a minute I thought the "groundsman" was well...you know haha. Wishful thinking *wink*
Hey, if the shoe fits...
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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who hasent Sass...-smile-
I married a women once who doesnt recognize love.
not sure where this came from ...heard the song...and understood it not always the emotion it draws out.
-headwag-....yes um I'm the grounds keeper...you ready for a trim...-smile-...I'm always Michael
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I think I got a different interpretation but with that said, you so often command a second and third read which can alter perspectives each time.
Clever groundsman haha
Man of MANY talents. Yeah I bet you're always ready
to keep tidy grounds haha
Sassofrass x
Comment from MissMerri
I think this is one of the most intriguing poems I've read in weeks. I'm fascinated by how your mind manipulates words and familiar phrases into something surprising and completely unexpected. There is never triteness or cliche in anything you write. I love exploring your unusual and always poetic thought patterns through the things you post. They speak in a language purely your own but relate to your readers through stirred emotions and relatable stories. It is sad to live with an unresponsive wife or to love more than you are loved. I hope this is not your story. It is definitely a poetic experience. I enjoyed the trip. M.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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I think this is one of the most intriguing poems I've read in weeks. I'm fascinated by how your mind manipulates words and familiar phrases into something surprising and completely unexpected. There is never triteness or cliche in anything you write. I love exploring your unusual and always poetic thought patterns through the things you post. They speak in a language purely your own but relate to your readers through stirred emotions and relatable stories. It is sad to live with an unresponsive wife or to love more than you are loved. I hope this is not your story. It is definitely a poetic experience. I enjoyed the trip. M.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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well you know it is... poetry is our story''s.
Hello Meadow...-smile-
I heard the song...though attracted to its power immediately, was put off at first by the unexpected lyrics. usually we hear Dolly Parton the seas with I will always love you. not gut wrenching bellows of never me. it cornered me...so we fought. wa la...-smile-...I'm always Michael
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the way your presentation reinforced the "auditoriums full of emptiness". I could see the "prairie schooner" and hear the "country songs". Cheers- Joan
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I liked the way your presentation reinforced the "auditoriums full of emptiness". I could see the "prairie schooner" and hear the "country songs". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks everything is to Cinderella humour as if the spirituality and the term of living in appreciation of spirituality and part of our living is subject to the same humour; I liked.
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This speaks everything is to Cinderella humour as if the spirituality and the term of living in appreciation of spirituality and part of our living is subject to the same humour; I liked.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
It was great with Objective Content in this piece.
Besides depth value, Descriptive Measures were a plus.
Also, theme and imagery were perfect.
No grammar issues.
slowed well-read well Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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It was great with Objective Content in this piece.
Besides depth value, Descriptive Measures were a plus.
Also, theme and imagery were perfect.
No grammar issues.
slowed well-read well Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
