nature nurtures
5-7-5 nature contest22 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the use of alliteration
to describe nature.
-Using a few words, you
show what nature does
and the importance of that.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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-Very nice artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the use of alliteration
to describe nature.
-Using a few words, you
show what nature does
and the importance of that.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Hi Pam. Thanks for reviewing my nature nurtures poem I tried to ger the alliteration right and work it into my meaasge As always appreciate you comments Cheers Pam and have a great day Christine
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You are quite welcome, Christine. I think the alliteration worked well. You have a great day, too.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine and interesting 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Excellent combination of the first two words in sound and meaning
It certainly does seem like a repeated pattern,
back and forth, in so many different ways
Excellent poetics in rhyme and alliteration,
And choice of art work
Well done, my friend
RS
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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This is a fine and interesting 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Excellent combination of the first two words in sound and meaning
It certainly does seem like a repeated pattern,
back and forth, in so many different ways
Excellent poetics in rhyme and alliteration,
And choice of art work
Well done, my friend
RS
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Hi RS Thanks very much for your review yes nature is cyclic in many ways we are just a blimp in the big scheme of things But what fun to be here and be able to share our words with each other Cheers My friend Christine
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Christine,
Beautiful 5/7/5 poem about nature. Good job with the syllable count and presentation. Nice alliteration and rhyme. Good job sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Hello, Christine,
Beautiful 5/7/5 poem about nature. Good job with the syllable count and presentation. Nice alliteration and rhyme. Good job sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Hi Gypsy, Great to hear from you and thanks for your lovely review for my nature nurtures . I thought I would add alliteration to help highlight my thoughts Cheers And hugs back Christine
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of alliteration (nature nurtures, buries...birth, tick tock). I like how you cover the passage of time in nature, from birth to death, rebirth and the cyclical nature of the seasons.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Great use of alliteration (nature nurtures, buries...birth, tick tock). I like how you cover the passage of time in nature, from birth to death, rebirth and the cyclical nature of the seasons.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Hi lyenochka. Thanks for your comments I tried to use alliteration etc and still have a message Cheers Christine
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Hi lyenochka. Thanks for your comments I tried to use alliteration etc and still have a message Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, Christine. Nature does nurture earth and we have to understand that it goes in cycles, sometimes too little and sometimes too much of a good thing. Earth is perpetually cycling as your third line suggests. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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This is excellent, Christine. Nature does nurture earth and we have to understand that it goes in cycles, sometimes too little and sometimes too much of a good thing. Earth is perpetually cycling as your third line suggests. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Thanls so much for your kind words and yes it still goes around and around. A bit of fun to do these contests Cheers Christine
Comment from miajaffri
I think your poem describes the life and renewing of earth with, buries the dead then
gives birth. I especially like the first line because it gives hope and then the last
line makes me feel the continuing of stopping and starting again.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I think your poem describes the life and renewing of earth with, buries the dead then
gives birth. I especially like the first line because it gives hope and then the last
line makes me feel the continuing of stopping and starting again.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi maijaffri. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem and you lovely comments much appreciated and yes the circle of life in nature is timeless Cheers Christine
Comment from Liberty Justice
STRONG entry for contest of 5-7-5. "Tick tock" is such profound statement of the life cycle and cycle of nature. Your photo is so mysterious and speaks to the mysteries of life we don't comprehend, yet. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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STRONG entry for contest of 5-7-5. "Tick tock" is such profound statement of the life cycle and cycle of nature. Your photo is so mysterious and speaks to the mysteries of life we don't comprehend, yet. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Liberty Justice. Many thanks for your great review and a positive outlook for this poem Always a challenge to do these short poems. Pleased to hear from you . Cheers Christine
Comment from Irish Rain
I love that description, 'buries the dead then gives birth'...wonderful! This is a great entry for this 5-7-5 nature contest!! Good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I love that description, 'buries the dead then gives birth'...wonderful! This is a great entry for this 5-7-5 nature contest!! Good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Irish Rain. yes thats the truth in nature it buries the dead and then reproduces Wonderful isn't it Thanks for your good luck wishes Cheers Christine
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
An interesting point- well actually a couple to ponder on, a very good 5-7-5 I find that number hard to write for some reason. I think this is very well worded well done and good luck kind regards Meia x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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An interesting point- well actually a couple to ponder on, a very good 5-7-5 I find that number hard to write for some reason. I think this is very well worded well done and good luck kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Meia, Yes these short poems are challenging to get a good message in so few words I find them fun to do And Thanks so much for giving this one a review . Hope all is good Cheers Christinex
Comment from okanaganbell
Very nice. I find the words captivate the image, in the format in which it is written. I am not a huge fan of small poems with defined syllable rules...They're like an ingredient thrown into your recipe, just to see if you can cook...It's not really dinner, but more like a test...my meaning anyway. You have, however, done a good job of it.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Very nice. I find the words captivate the image, in the format in which it is written. I am not a huge fan of small poems with defined syllable rules...They're like an ingredient thrown into your recipe, just to see if you can cook...It's not really dinner, but more like a test...my meaning anyway. You have, however, done a good job of it.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Okanganbell. Thanks for your review and sharing your perspective on these short poems. I find them a challenge and pleased you thought this a good job done. Just a nibble ha ha Cheers Christine
