~ Positive Steps ~
Six Word Poem18 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Haha what a clever bit of poetic word play here and I'm sure well walked feet are the happiest. Tell that to my 11 year old tech head son, will ya?!! LOL
I know when I'm standing on mine all day they don't necessarily appreciate it but when they have a good work out they feel well travelled, albeit a little weary.
I like the dual use of "bare" and "souls" and you were even clever enough to include the foot. Not an easy feet haha
LOVED. No fuckin sixes though.
Hugs P
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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Haha what a clever bit of poetic word play here and I'm sure well walked feet are the happiest. Tell that to my 11 year old tech head son, will ya?!! LOL
I know when I'm standing on mine all day they don't necessarily appreciate it but when they have a good work out they feel well travelled, albeit a little weary.
I like the dual use of "bare" and "souls" and you were even clever enough to include the foot. Not an easy feet haha
LOVED. No fuckin sixes though.
Hugs P
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2017
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P, Would have loved a six but... fuck it I?ll take your five :-) Thank you for ?getting? my poem. You know not everyone actually got it....strangely. Love your pun! ~DD
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Haha...I'll save one from this weeks stash.
So write something awesome again, okay? LOL
Got your email.
Are you fucking kidding. They didn't get it?
Then they didn't fuckin read it haha
xx
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Lol... so pleased you ?get it? and ?get me?. Love it! ~Dxx
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LOL I DO get you for sure...but I have a confession to make...I think I had you confused with someone else. I thought your name was Janet LOL
Thats a far cry from the other haha
Don't worry though, no one ever gets my name right either. They always drop that second bloody P and it pisses me to tears.
I mean when I wrote it at the bottom of my message I mean FFS how ignorant are some people?!
I think like five people in my life have spelled it correctly first time.
No one gets it right here...Okay, there are like two people here that spell it right.
But the rest have no idea and don't care.
Heads up their arses I'm afraid.
I sometimes don't even feel like i have a fuckin name LOL
I just wrote this jingle a couple of days ago for all the nimrods who can't seem to get it...
ahem
NAME
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It's how the saying goes
What's in a name?...
Well there's a string of letters
and there's nine...
Not eight I'm telling you,
What is this game?...
That's someone elses handle pal
Not mine!...
So why's it quite okay
to leave one out?...
You tryna piss me off?
Is your ass wise?
This fact I'm going to have
to bring about
My name spelled THERE before
your fucking eyes!
hahaha
You can use this if you want LMAO
I'm kidding.
I see P all over it. No touchy! haha
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You totally get me ... so refreshing. ~Dxx aka Janet.... don?t ever call me that!
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LMAO
When I read your email...I thought...am I looking in the fucking mirror? haha
Cept I'm not called Janet LMAO
For the record, I'm glad you're a kindred spirit who can appreciate the constant name debacle.
In spite of it being a bit ridiculous, I DO take it quite personally. I KNOW you get me on that.
Don't worry D...we MORE than measure up and DON'T you fuckin forget it! LOL
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BTW I think you may have a cut and paste issue or your inverted commas like being question marks LOL
I thought you were questioning what you'd written before LOL
I couldn't quite decipher it.
Now I got it.
Lol... so pleased you ?get it? and ?get me?.
Yep. "Got it" LOL
Just lettin' ya know...
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Ahh, bless you....and that?s not for sneezing. Your words mean a lot to me and remind me it?s not ME that has the issue but them with hearing, attention to detail, manners, respect, thoughtfulness...gosh this is when they get my name wrong.
I hear you loud and clear girlfriend and yes...it is like talking to myself when talking to you..not in a split personality way but in the - on the same page - way. : -) xxx
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Next time I?ll try using my computer when I want to get all fancy with punctuation. I?m using my phone so sorry about the messy appearance. xx
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Ahah!
Thanks for the heads up. Now I know what the question marks mean, all good.
Do what suits mate.
But tell your phone from me he has an identity issue haha
x
Comment from BOO ghost
A colorful presentation. Nice group of words. I mage is fitting of poem. Wonder if the voting booth is still open for this contest? BOO is the worst procrastinator and I leave no shadow. That is queer? Maybe I am dead? Wonderful poem and good luck in the contest! BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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A colorful presentation. Nice group of words. I mage is fitting of poem. Wonder if the voting booth is still open for this contest? BOO is the worst procrastinator and I leave no shadow. That is queer? Maybe I am dead? Wonderful poem and good luck in the contest! BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thanks Boo G, I appreciate the review. Have a bootiful weekend. ~DD
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Like that, BOOtiful!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow! I sure would NOT want to be judging this contest - this is not only charming it's clever/witty as heck with the play on words! What a story you tell in only six words, and it inspires, too - an actual moral! VERY impressive. Six stars worth of impressive, but sadly, I'm out. Let me say this, though - I read a lot of prose as a rule, so I'm very careful about awarding sixes to small poems, as tough as they can be to write - but my friend, I'd slap a six on this so fast , you'd be dizzy.
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Wow! I sure would NOT want to be judging this contest - this is not only charming it's clever/witty as heck with the play on words! What a story you tell in only six words, and it inspires, too - an actual moral! VERY impressive. Six stars worth of impressive, but sadly, I'm out. Let me say this, though - I read a lot of prose as a rule, so I'm very careful about awarding sixes to small poems, as tough as they can be to write - but my friend, I'd slap a six on this so fast , you'd be dizzy.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Dawn, thank you so much for your awesome review. It put a warm smile on my face as did the mention of a six star. Your comments were definitely much appreciated and very encouraging. Thank you again : -) ~DD
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Very much my pleasure. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
And of course there is a play on the word souls/soles as well. Thanks for leaving me something to comment on. Well I have soles on my feats, sorry, feet. What fun this is.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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And of course there is a play on the word souls/soles as well. Thanks for leaving me something to comment on. Well I have soles on my feats, sorry, feet. What fun this is.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Pantygynt, thank you for your lighthearted review on my short six word poem. Would you believe there were one of two that did not see the pun...even after my end notes. Oh well, I did have fun writing it. ~DD
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As the old advertisements for British Railways used to say, "Getting there is half the fun. Lol.
Comment from BeasPeas
So true. If we don't take chances to achieve, we never will succeed. Successful people, they say, have faced failure several times before attaining their goal. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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So true. If we don't take chances to achieve, we never will succeed. Successful people, they say, have faced failure several times before attaining their goal. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you Marilyn. As always, your comments are much appreciated and valued. ~DD
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Nicely done metaphor.
As we conquer things in live we move on and feel a great acompolishment. Very well thought out to make us think
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Nicely done metaphor.
As we conquer things in live we move on and feel a great acompolishment. Very well thought out to make us think
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you Barb. Your comments are appreciated as always and so too is your understanding of my six word poem. Kindest regards ~DD
Comment from Irish Rain
Absolutely!! Anything we do, that we thought we couldn't, or that we put off, is bound to make us happier, more positive! A wonderful entry!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Absolutely!! Anything we do, that we thought we couldn't, or that we put off, is bound to make us happier, more positive! A wonderful entry!! Blessings...
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you Irish Rain. I appreciate you review on my six word poem. Big hugs ~DDx
Comment from Aussie
Not easy to tell a story in six words; I did. I liked your take on being active in the feats that challenge you. We can sit in the sand or get up and lend a hand. Best wishes for the contest XXK.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Not easy to tell a story in six words; I did. I liked your take on being active in the feats that challenge you. We can sit in the sand or get up and lend a hand. Best wishes for the contest XXK.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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K, Thank you so very much for your very much appreciated review on my six word poem but also for the sparkly six stars. I'm truly grateful. Yes, lending a helping hand or accomplishing a positive act makes a big difference and is a way to a happier and more fulfilling life. ~DDxx
Comment from doggymad
Well done DD, you have managed to convey a great message with only six words. Not an easy task.
I wish you every luck in the contest with this on.
Indeed it is challenge that drives us on
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Well done DD, you have managed to convey a great message with only six words. Not an easy task.
I wish you every luck in the contest with this on.
Indeed it is challenge that drives us on
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you Freda. I appreciate your review on my six word poem. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DDx
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, DD
= Absolutely a super job with the play on words.
= Great job of pairing poem and artwork to make a powerful statement.
= Good luck in the contest--super entry.
= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Hi, DD
= Absolutely a super job with the play on words.
= Great job of pairing poem and artwork to make a powerful statement.
= Good luck in the contest--super entry.
= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
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Thank you Jax. I appreciate your thoughtful comments on my six word poem. Thank you too for the contest wishes. Kind regards ~DD
