Love
Love Life34 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Kahpot: excellent poem about love. I like how you loop the words
to flow from one to another. Congrats on your relationship.
Embrace ignited - great word choices. flylikeaneagle - nancy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Kahpot: excellent poem about love. I like how you loop the words
to flow from one to another. Congrats on your relationship.
Embrace ignited - great word choices. flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Poetic Friend
In its brevity, this love poem is simply love. Also, this poem would have make a great entry in the Loop Poem Contest. Great execution!
I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments, love fills that empty void.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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In its brevity, this love poem is simply love. Also, this poem would have make a great entry in the Loop Poem Contest. Great execution!
I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments, love fills that empty void.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from robina1978
Nice artwork that complements your little love poem perfectly. How nice you found your love quickly, which explains why the poem is short. I really enjoyed the poem covering 3 forms. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Nice artwork that complements your little love poem perfectly. How nice you found your love quickly, which explains why the poem is short. I really enjoyed the poem covering 3 forms. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sis Cat
This is an excellent, short love poem in terms of linking last word/first word structure as well as its unobtrusive acrostic. But what stands out are the passion and gentleness of your words which resemble wedding vows:
Living our lives shared as one
One that filled that empty void
Void imploded from love's embrace
Embrace ignited our quest for living
Your endearing poem is a little gem. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this fine entry.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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This is an excellent, short love poem in terms of linking last word/first word structure as well as its unobtrusive acrostic. But what stands out are the passion and gentleness of your words which resemble wedding vows:
Living our lives shared as one
One that filled that empty void
Void imploded from love's embrace
Embrace ignited our quest for living
Your endearing poem is a little gem. Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with this fine entry.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot. Your entry to the love poem contest is rather a three-in-one poem. You have written an acrostic, loop, love poem. All in correct form and I wish you luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Hi Kahpot. Your entry to the love poem contest is rather a three-in-one poem. You have written an acrostic, loop, love poem. All in correct form and I wish you luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from estory
I like the loop format, and all the words connecting and linking these themes in a never ending circle that speaks of the eternity of life and love. estory
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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I like the loop format, and all the words connecting and linking these themes in a never ending circle that speaks of the eternity of life and love. estory
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from sunnilicious
Love unions are a blessing for us all. I like to think of it as a gift from God. However, I am still single, romanticizing and trying. I am glad your relationship is working together happily. Attraction and compatibility gets you half there. Nice work. God bless you.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Love unions are a blessing for us all. I like to think of it as a gift from God. However, I am still single, romanticizing and trying. I am glad your relationship is working together happily. Attraction and compatibility gets you half there. Nice work. God bless you.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and I hope it works for you, I did find though it just seems to happen****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, congratulations on finding love - it is always especially joyful to learn it happened to a poet, one who is as sensitively gifted as you are. The piece is fully compliant with the prompt and as an added feature, is acrostic in form. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, congratulations on finding love - it is always especially joyful to learn it happened to a poet, one who is as sensitively gifted as you are. The piece is fully compliant with the prompt and as an added feature, is acrostic in form. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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thank you very much, on both counts****kahpot
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You are very welcome indeed, on both counts...Eve
Comment from Brigitte Elko
An excellent presentation of love in your words. You have captured the rapture and wholeness of an over used word (love) with dignity and and power. I really liked the vision "imploded and ignited" conjured up in my mind. A very sensual piece to read. Thank you for sharing this. Good luck in the contest,looks like a winner.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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An excellent presentation of love in your words. You have captured the rapture and wholeness of an over used word (love) with dignity and and power. I really liked the vision "imploded and ignited" conjured up in my mind. A very sensual piece to read. Thank you for sharing this. Good luck in the contest,looks like a winner.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, something >>>> yes don't know how to say it, but I just finished reading your amazing six-word poem, and about to Fan You ??? extrodinary ****kahpot
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I am honored and humbled.
Brigitte
Comment from Irish Rain
Such a sweet love poem Kahpot, and you've also included an acrostic, and a Loop poem, quite ambitious!! Great entry for this contest, blessings....
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Such a sweet love poem Kahpot, and you've also included an acrostic, and a Loop poem, quite ambitious!! Great entry for this contest, blessings....
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
