Bring Me Home (2)
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Comment from frierajac
It is the same story that is always worth telling of the honor of the Hero and
his own. this fact is conveyed nicely in your poem. this must be a personal
statement and the carrying out of the message with the flag makes it very
patriot
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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It is the same story that is always worth telling of the honor of the Hero and
his own. this fact is conveyed nicely in your poem. this must be a personal
statement and the carrying out of the message with the flag makes it very
patriot
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, it is a passion of mine****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Bring Me Home, is set up correctly and echoes the decades plea to find and return the service members left behind in Vietnam. One note: the second line might start with the word 'heroes'. Happy day.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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This 5-7-5, Bring Me Home, is set up correctly and echoes the decades plea to find and return the service members left behind in Vietnam. One note: the second line might start with the word 'heroes'. Happy day.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much my friend and I have corrected****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the fortune of the heroes who once tried very hard to free their land but after the fight they without resisting conflict won the deal somehow and now they are brave soldiers gone far from life; I liked.
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This speaks the fortune of the heroes who once tried very hard to free their land but after the fight they without resisting conflict won the deal somehow and now they are brave soldiers gone far from life; I liked.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is the time to kneel. Not on a football field. The professional football players should remember this. Too many people sacrificed for us to dishonor them.
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This is the time to kneel. Not on a football field. The professional football players should remember this. Too many people sacrificed for us to dishonor them.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good 5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry.
A strong message in just a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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This is a good 5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry.
A strong message in just a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a great poem. There was in the news a story about a soldier who died in WWII was finally brought home for his family. Patricia
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This is a great poem. There was in the news a story about a soldier who died in WWII was finally brought home for his family. Patricia
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great message in your 5-7-5! Yes, we need to remember our veterans who gave up so much of their lives, safety, sanity only to return to have been forgotten and not given the promised benefits or help to transition back to civilian life.
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Great message in your 5-7-5! Yes, we need to remember our veterans who gave up so much of their lives, safety, sanity only to return to have been forgotten and not given the promised benefits or help to transition back to civilian life.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
