Never A Bother When You Pray
Spiritual commentary.16 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It is true He knows everything about us more than even ourselves because we don't look that deep. Very well done and so true
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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It is true He knows everything about us more than even ourselves because we don't look that deep. Very well done and so true
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Barb.
Comment from DR DIP
Nice words Pat Your faith is always showing so strongly in these writes Pat you write these words so well . You are definitely a child of God thankyou for sharing.
dip
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Nice words Pat Your faith is always showing so strongly in these writes Pat you write these words so well . You are definitely a child of God thankyou for sharing.
dip
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Dip.
Comment from Heather Knight
I agree. We all have a mission to fulfill, a role to play and they are all important. I also think that God always listens when we need him.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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I agree. We all have a mission to fulfill, a role to play and they are all important. I also think that God always listens when we need him.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Maria.
Comment from Ellie707
Beautiful and inspirational! The first stanza - I love how it comes across as a loving father.
The second stanza is a little awkward.
The third stanza makes you feel like you are one of a kind, and that God cares enough about you to remind you that there are specific things for you to do that cannot be done by another person.
Ellie707
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Beautiful and inspirational! The first stanza - I love how it comes across as a loving father.
The second stanza is a little awkward.
The third stanza makes you feel like you are one of a kind, and that God cares enough about you to remind you that there are specific things for you to do that cannot be done by another person.
Ellie707
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Ellie.
Comment from lyenochka
What a comforting poem, Patricia! I remember a pastor saying ironically, "Why pray when you can worry?" Yes, our Lord cares for us so prayer should always be our first response. I wonder if the line, "Why are you so important to me" should end in a question mark.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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What a comforting poem, Patricia! I remember a pastor saying ironically, "Why pray when you can worry?" Yes, our Lord cares for us so prayer should always be our first response. I wonder if the line, "Why are you so important to me" should end in a question mark.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Helen.
Comment from dragonpoet
These rhyming quatrains tell us what they always say at mass. That God loves and and hears us when we pray. It also explains that we each have our own reason for being here too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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These rhyming quatrains tell us what they always say at mass. That God loves and and hears us when we pray. It also explains that we each have our own reason for being here too.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, dragon poet.
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You're welcome.
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