Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. This is a very nicely constructed and rhymed poem with a loving message that He is there for us. He is our father and our comfort after all and does His job well. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Marilyn.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Patricia;
Thank you for sharing your faith and love of Jesus with us through the words of this poem. He does love to hear us pray - He is so thrilled at our voices when we direct our words to Him.

~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Patty.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

I apologize for being late with reviewing this but I have been locked out of my computer for three days and this is the first chance I have had to read my 'oh so many messages'. Very nice work with this one. I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017

Thank you for the lovely review, Sasha.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

Again you've written a very nice poem.
It was very interesting to read.
You're always wonderful at writing them.

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Kat. I hope you will be back to writing soon as I miss your work.

reply by MizKat on 05-Nov-2017

How sweet of you to tell me that you miss my work. I'll try my best to be on here for a long time yet. Kat

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

A beautiful, spiritual poem Patricia, the Lords words to children as they pray is so moving.
your words flow so smoothly and are so poignant.........just wonderful.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Mitchell.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

How nice to know there is someone listening. Knowing Jesus hears our heartfelt prayers, is like having a psychologist on hand. In your poem once again your faith is reflected and has a domino affect on the reader. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Jaded.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

B(b)ecause I know things about you
that many others will never see...You need to capitalize the "B" in the word "because" here, Pat...


Then(,) as you pray(,) my child... Add commas where indicated for proper punctuation, Pat...

Decent poem, excellent message as usual.
~Dean

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Dean and the help.

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Nov-2017

My pleasure.
~Dean

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

I did go back and change the post. I had just sent the reply before I made the changes.

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Nov-2017

I saw that.
I have restored your fifth star as well. :)

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank you.

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Nov-2017

Absolutely. :)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I again enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the "Heavenly Father". I admired your rhymed quatrains and the empowering final line. Cheers and have a pleasant weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Joan.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= So true. Many things can be pushed off for another to do in our stead.
= BUT, the Lord's calling/work, is non-negotiable.
= Well penned, with super artwork.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for the lovely review, Jackie.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written poem that I truly needed to read right now. Such great wording full of truth. I am thankful that is the way He truly is. You used great wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

Thank you for the kind review, Teri.