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Comment from Liberty Justice
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WOW what a dynamic photo of a Siberian Snowman. Must be in Iceland, Canada, or somewhere. This script or story is very interesting as it has conversations where people are discussing the reasons behind people's horrible deeds and what are the methods of help for these people. Nice! lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this missing Liberty and Jean I love when you kick in we are friends here I don't have friends here from the very beginning of many you're one of the few thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
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You have an interesting use of words and I like how you mention the modern world of self publishing. I have self published three books, anyone can publish in today's world.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks Darling...
    Forever..
    A Wave tis nothing more or less...
    Than a Gesture...
    (Theology 27.79) Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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"Hold on a second?"
"While I tie my shoes!"
(I never can taste them but not lace them)
"Properly!"
"Okay, that's better!"
... What do you mean here exactly, Ricky? Please explain these lines to me; I am willing to listen and understand.
Why would someone wish to taste their shoes? ...
"Spoctologically...like Chocolate Cake on a date with,Satan!" How do these two things relate, my fiend? I'm not diggnin' the vibe or feeling the connection.
By making up the word, "Spoctologically", I take it the word has something to do with the Vulcan Dr. Spock of Star Trek television series fame? Sure, both Satan and Spock are rumored to have pointed ears.
But so do hobbits and elves...
~Dean

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Basic purposes of this piece is the ability of a writer or an artist to master their trade which is of course but the logical response to logically logical and you did get that right with the Spock thing which is quite enterprising but you didn't get that which has to do with the Star Trek ship as Force eating chocolate cake waiting to all part of The Rime of the poem the show the ability to utilize words and match them and rhyme rhyming words don't always have to make sense poetry doesn't always have to make sense Pros doesn't always have to make sense it and it's up to the style and the conceptions of that particular individual as to how they want to portray themselves this piece is been posted up on the first page on a boost a little more it will pull in six star reviews in an all-time best within about another 2 days why cuz I wrote it dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Nov-2017
    I haven't the slightest clue concerning what you've said here, Ricky.
    But I would defend to the death your right to say it.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks dimensionally, evaluation, mention of qualities of writing abilities of the poet, the process of writing, information about publication, type of writing; I liked.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this comment was actually something that's been bubbling in my mind for many years about the ability of writers talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from robyn corum
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Ricky,

There is just no telling how smart or talented you are. We have no way of knowing because you refuse to just tell a story.

I've seen you reply to people, when you actually type things out instead of dictating it.

Still wish you'd consider it.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    My ability is a writer I've posted many times comes from above from tragedy and losses of over 14 years ago it was replaced it was replacing my grief and pain as well as Shane for allowing my son first to pass it in eight months later my wife it all started on his laptop around second week in April less than two weeks after we do need a Jason to war against tanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Ricky

= I do apologize, but this long paragraph, and lack of punctuation makes it very difficult for me to follow along. As well, the lines start running together, so my train of thought loses attention.
= It would be very helpful if you separate you work with shorter paragraphs, and punctuation.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Sorry Jack's I will be writing on my laptop my Acer very soon I have to acquire have to actually acquire Wifi service is not from my current supplier Verizon they are overcharging me for my original deal so I will refuse to pay the bill they refused to to supply WiFi thanks dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 03-Nov-2017
    Oooh, so sorry. How aggravating to deal with. Hope it is resolved soon. (*<*)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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This is well done on the ability to writing and how to keep going at the same time. I am not sure how the topic relates but I enjoyed the content

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks Barb for not shredding this because of the punctuation and run in sentences talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Ricky. Well mate, this one is clever. It always is an incredible thought process, I go through with you to get to the real you. Once I get there, it's a great experience. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    thanks kiwi always a pleasure for you to be reading my works this is one of my more imaginative and creative pieces thanks again doctor Ricky 1024