Bring Me Home
For All The Lost And Lonely32 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Being close is not a problem with my ex-wife's side of the family, kahpot. They all either live with a fellow family member, or within ten miles of each other.
Those who are no longer living are buried in the Ash Ridge Cemetery not five miles away--the whole lot of 'em.
Needless to say, they are a very close-knit group.
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Being close is not a problem with my ex-wife's side of the family, kahpot. They all either live with a fellow family member, or within ten miles of each other.
Those who are no longer living are buried in the Ash Ridge Cemetery not five miles away--the whole lot of 'em.
Needless to say, they are a very close-knit group.
~Dean
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, wish I could say the same about mine****kahpot
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My pleasure, "K".
~Dean
Comment from B.B. Rose
Okay. This is great except (In My Haughty Opinion) you have used the wrong pronoun. A dead person doesn't write poems and it sounds whiney to boot. If you change "I" to "We," I think you'd have a dynamite poem. You would also have a repeating line like a hymn's refrain
Born he was to wanting hands
Buried he was in lonely lands
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Okay. This is great except (In My Haughty Opinion) you have used the wrong pronoun. A dead person doesn't write poems and it sounds whiney to boot. If you change "I" to "We," I think you'd have a dynamite poem. You would also have a repeating line like a hymn's refrain
Born he was to wanting hands
Buried he was in lonely lands
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you and yes I see what you mean cheers my freind****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a deep message conveyed in two short lines, although it would not have the same meaning without your footnote to explain it.
Very well done, anyways.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is a deep message conveyed in two short lines, although it would not have the same meaning without your footnote to explain it.
Very well done, anyways.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
Lovely picture and words,so few that say so much. I've never seen that movie but I am a Russell Crowe fan so I'll check it out. You are so right that family being in your life is the most important thing, keeping them close. My brother and I didn't talk for years, I'm not sure why, he just drifted away from the family. The next time we were together was at his funeral. Never let go of the ones you love.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Lovely picture and words,so few that say so much. I've never seen that movie but I am a Russell Crowe fan so I'll check it out. You are so right that family being in your life is the most important thing, keeping them close. My brother and I didn't talk for years, I'm not sure why, he just drifted away from the family. The next time we were together was at his funeral. Never let go of the ones you love.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much and I agree don't let go****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It's a wonderful thing to be born to wanting hands. It would be terrible to be an unwanted child, yet many are. Loving hands will always bring you home.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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It's a wonderful thing to be born to wanting hands. It would be terrible to be an unwanted child, yet many are. Loving hands will always bring you home.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. When we grow up we wish we could be far away from our siblings. They drive us mad at times. When we are adults and older we realize how much part of us they really are.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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A very well-written poem. When we grow up we wish we could be far away from our siblings. They drive us mad at times. When we are adults and older we realize how much part of us they really are.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from Sanku
Wanting hands can have two layers of meaning .one a family that is in want.
two. affectionate .a family that makes a child wanted.
Forced to migrate their life is finished in alien lands
quite a sad scenario.I hope my understanding is right.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Wanting hands can have two layers of meaning .one a family that is in want.
two. affectionate .a family that makes a child wanted.
Forced to migrate their life is finished in alien lands
quite a sad scenario.I hope my understanding is right.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much and yes your meaning is correct many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Profound true words here and if we are lucky enough to have siblings it is good to have them near, a resonating write which I enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Profound true words here and if we are lucky enough to have siblings it is good to have them near, a resonating write which I enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your poem inspired by the Russell Crowe movie. It is hard to think of being far from our loved ones, and if we could achieve world peace, maybe no one would have to travel across the globe unless they wanted to,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your poem inspired by the Russell Crowe movie. It is hard to think of being far from our loved ones, and if we could achieve world peace, maybe no one would have to travel across the globe unless they wanted to,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a profound poem I was born into a family where I was not a wanted child. I do hope your day is filled with many wonderful and beautiful things... Patricia
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is a profound poem I was born into a family where I was not a wanted child. I do hope your day is filled with many wonderful and beautiful things... Patricia
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
