Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Strong, determined, and independent. All special qualities Pooh possessed that you captured well in this poem.

One glitch though, the correct spelling of his name is Winnie the Pooh.

You may wish to readdress that little oversight.

Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for the read and the catch. I have edited.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This could be a fine entry for the contest
but the last line seems to have six syllables
Otherwise, an excellent poem, stuffed pet or not,
Low maintenance pets are the best
Excellent picture
Good luck, but change the syllables
RS

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for the read and the catch. I changed the last line as suggested. Your help is much appreciated.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Good

This is cute. While there is a world of pet owners that will disagree with you on this one, why not, right?
I think you missed the 5-7-5 though. The last line has 6 syllables.
Still a good effort.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Yes, you are correct. I have edited. Thanks for the catch.