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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "No letting Go"off the chart genuis
7 total reviews
Comment from lauralumummu
I would have put " you came alive "not come but that being said it is a beautiful poem about an extraordinary woman. Evokes images of a colorful passionate love story with interesting descriptions.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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I would have put " you came alive "not come but that being said it is a beautiful poem about an extraordinary woman. Evokes images of a colorful passionate love story with interesting descriptions.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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if you knew me Mummu...youd know I'm not all that concerned with what "you'd" have put in my poem. "they" put toxic waste in our water too...but I dont agree with that "them" "you"....this poem isnt even promoted do you think you know me... well enough to write my thoughts better than me...?
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No offense intended, Just constructive criticism. My review is an honest opinion, not the gospel.
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amen...
Comment from frierajac
I like your very romantic take on the movement of dance through your stanzas.
I don't know why, I feel like there is a tango lurking somewhere in the background
although there isn't any tango music present in the presentation .
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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I like your very romantic take on the movement of dance through your stanzas.
I don't know why, I feel like there is a tango lurking somewhere in the background
although there isn't any tango music present in the presentation .
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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ah I tango-d with Maureen Napier....where do you go from there...once youve supped on mana everything else taste like toast....I need some marmalade....always Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow what a visually stunning poem Michael. You have a knack for eluding to something but not really which tends to give your reader many vantage points, all of which are most favourable in this eloquent delivery. From the gobstopping opener and bookend closer (love this full circle effect) to the dance of love. This truly basked aglow.
Michael Magnifico!
Bravo.
A stunner.
Sixofrass xx
PS Anyone who can use a heavy word like "gobsmacked" and make it light as a feather and an absolute show stopper, is a true wordsmith.
You ARE unique and very talented. Don't never forget that *finger shake* LOL
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Wow what a visually stunning poem Michael. You have a knack for eluding to something but not really which tends to give your reader many vantage points, all of which are most favourable in this eloquent delivery. From the gobstopping opener and bookend closer (love this full circle effect) to the dance of love. This truly basked aglow.
Michael Magnifico!
Bravo.
A stunner.
Sixofrass xx
PS Anyone who can use a heavy word like "gobsmacked" and make it light as a feather and an absolute show stopper, is a true wordsmith.
You ARE unique and very talented. Don't never forget that *finger shake* LOL
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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ahhha....man am I gonna nominate the crap out of you.
Academy roll the red lets watch her catwalk....woooo what I'm talkin' bout!...-handfan-...my goodness I believe I've over heated I better lean on somethin' a lil' more steardier than myself at present...lordy ...-handfan- ...that woman sure do make an impression....bring me the sea I'm thirsty....-smile-...always Michael Magnifico
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I dare you
able sea man haha
Keep writing. Don't forget to "lean" into it haha
*finger wag*
*smiling*
Comment from RGstar
"you...
come alive some time ago
gobsmacked in the middle of me"
Poetic excellence. Love the above. Strong opening line, and the fact that you closed with it, brought it home beautifully.
In your own way, nicely balanced, not as cryptic, which I think suits.
you make your mark, as romantic as lyrical.
Love your work, my brother.
6 stars for sure.
My best to you.
RG
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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"you...
come alive some time ago
gobsmacked in the middle of me"
Poetic excellence. Love the above. Strong opening line, and the fact that you closed with it, brought it home beautifully.
In your own way, nicely balanced, not as cryptic, which I think suits.
you make your mark, as romantic as lyrical.
Love your work, my brother.
6 stars for sure.
My best to you.
RG
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Hey Star...-smile-
much obliged my Friend.
always my pleasure when youre around. appreciate you Sir. always Michael
Comment from amada
Wow Michael, your lines come straight to my heart and to my years of dancing! I just love these lines "died to dance in love just once/tableau turned substantial rainbow." The words seem to melt in my mouth. Such a enchanting write!
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Wow Michael, your lines come straight to my heart and to my years of dancing! I just love these lines "died to dance in love just once/tableau turned substantial rainbow." The words seem to melt in my mouth. Such a enchanting write!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
As I warned you to second star review Michael that comes with one restriction you need to review my latest piece and return the favor to Gift of Life fact or fiction for my son Jason from of course passed away and we donated his organs thanks this was beautifully written and deep Ricky 1024
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As I warned you to second star review Michael that comes with one restriction you need to review my latest piece and return the favor to Gift of Life fact or fiction for my son Jason from of course passed away and we donated his organs thanks this was beautifully written and deep Ricky 1024
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
Comment from Joan E.
I'm glad to see you are back on a regular schedule again. Thanks for including your signature circularity and transporting me with your references to "calypso" and the "walls of Jericho". Smiles and enjoy the Eve- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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I'm glad to see you are back on a regular schedule again. Thanks for including your signature circularity and transporting me with your references to "calypso" and the "walls of Jericho". Smiles and enjoy the Eve- Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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Hey J...-smile-
ah just skimmin' stones....read Easy Everett earlier.
now there's a guy who knows youre not all that....you got any chips...always Michael
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Keep skimming stones and creating more poetry. Cheers- Joan