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We Will Dance

When There Is That...Connection.

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Comment from Sasha
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Hello stranger, it's been awhile since I've heard from you. What a lovely poem to just 'pop out'. Beautifully written and I'll keep my fingers crossed that she says yes to the dance. Please note, I am in the process of changing my name from Smurphgirlsasha to Smushy Pumpkin (S is for Smurphgirl and the P is for Petrova or Paranoia depending on your personal preference.) It may take a few days for the change to go into effect.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Lol, I'm glad you told me, I was going, "Who the hell is Smushy Pumpkin?"
    I hope you don't min, but you'll always be smurph to me!
    Good to hear from you again, I'm getting back into the swing of things (i hope) so don't be a stranger!
    Curt
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written and romantic poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you,
    Curt
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
Such a wonderful thing to just 'pop out.' The lines are smooth and full of rhythm and rhyme. Within the lines, you tell the story of someone who needs love, but shies away from it,

Great,

~patty~

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you Patty,
    You nailed it.But how do you tell someone not to be afraid? You don't. You tell them to be afraid, yet do it anyway.
    THAT, is living.
    Thanks again,
    Curt
Comment from Janet Foor
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A beautiful sentiment and I hope she agrees to the dance Curt.
Lovely rhyme and meter throughout this sonnet.
A somber note to this one but truly beautiful.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much my friend,
    Curt
Comment from Joan E.
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I have not read your work for some time--just over-scheduled--but I am glad I caught this evocative piece. I admired your love sonnet and its rhymed couplets. Here's to the dance! -Joan

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you Joan,
    It's not your fault, I took a long break, but it's coming back.
    Your thoughts, as always, are welcome here.
    Curt
reply by Joan E. on 01-Nov-2017
    I am glad to hear you are rejoining us and look forward to your new posts. I hope the rest of the week is productive. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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It was lovely, Curt, especially for a little something that 'popped out'! lol. It is so romantic, but also a little sad. Let's hope she sends out the message to say she feels the same. :) I enjoyed this one. :) Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you Sandra,
    I hope so too!
    Curt