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Comment from apky
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Hullo Doc,

You have another beautiful and spiritual work here,
as you count your blessings which are the free gifts of the Lord.

I have a wee suggestion in your lines below, which you can adopt of discard as you wish:

I wake and I passed (by) the flowers I see the beauty of their Santa and the colors that they so bring I passed (by) the trees and feel the warmth from the shade and taste from the bearing fruits and I passed (by) the waters as I quench my thirst and realize with this that God has given me the ability to be healthy and live my life properly

Thanks for sharing, Doc.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Hi and happy pre-halloween I figure if you go trick or treating over where you live looking at you you have to go as a gypsy beautiful Gypsy or perhaps of vampire female vampire let me know I have two three costumes of pumpkin I've been Anna and a ghoul so I have three choices but the Thanks for liking my religious and spiritual peace about the free gifts of Life dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the thoughts of life, how is Nature to him; he remembers the gift God has endowed so infinitely, everything so beautiful and needed for living every beautiful day; I liked.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    %uhh thanks for reviewing my piece it's an important statement to be made for people have no idea of the way the world works today the ones that drive three hours up in back 10 from New York to New Jersey just to make a little bit more an hour than the normal person would making their own town and state thanks Ricky 1024