Faith
1-7-1 Poem3 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good 1-7-1. Not easy to get your message across with so few words.
Well done. I hear your message loud and clear.
Adorable picture.
Good luck with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
A good 1-7-1. Not easy to get your message across with so few words.
Well done. I hear your message loud and clear.
Adorable picture.
Good luck with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
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Thank you,!
Comment from lyenochka
Great description of faith in this very brief poem! I like that it says,
"Complete trust and hopefulness"
and as it is bookended with the word, "Faith," it gives a finality about it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
Great description of faith in this very brief poem! I like that it says,
"Complete trust and hopefulness"
and as it is bookended with the word, "Faith," it gives a finality about it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind and insightful review!
Comment from sfharper
Beautiful use of this form with the word faith repeated. The explanation at the center is fulfilled by the bracketing of faith. Also, the drawing fits the topic well. It seems quiet and reflective.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
Beautiful use of this form with the word faith repeated. The explanation at the center is fulfilled by the bracketing of faith. Also, the drawing fits the topic well. It seems quiet and reflective.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for your insightful review!
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you're welcome