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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from nomi338
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As a matter of fact, I don't recall ever seeing a walrus in the flesh in all my 74 years of life. Funny, I have seen many different types of animals from all over the world, but cannot recall ever seeing a walrus except in photos or film clips. Your poem gave me quite a laugh, just to imagine such a thing. Good work.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
    Thanks, nomi. I just look in the mirror.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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Hi Bill
Another fun poem that was a pleasure to read, after the first four lines I did wonder were it was going....then it made perfect sense...........very clever
Mitchell

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Mitchell
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute short poem you have penned about the walrus. You used very good and descriptive wording with nice art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, great little poem, and I liked it a lot. Well, I have to say something else and meaningful before I can post this. To be honest. It would have been nice to earn some phoney dollars. That's how this sit works after all if any of us are going to be able post. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Ulla. I know, but I'm on the road this weekend and couldn't give it a chance to properly promote this one.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a fun poem, well written.
I'll never look at Tiger Lilies the say way again, though. LOL
And no, I've not seen bow ties for awhile. Thank goodness.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Sharon
Comment from RodG
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You've got quite an imagination, Bill. In a thousand years I would never have thought to compare a tiger lily to a walrush's wadded up bubble gum bow tie, but it does LOOK like that in the picture. Rod

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
    Thanks, Rod. I'm on walruses and couldn't find a good picture of one with a bubble gum bow tie.