Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

See how the ocean comes into play as the tide comes in and out each and every day. Here today gone tomorrow colors come and go as the tide turns to go.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

reply by country ranch writer on 30-Oct-2017

Smiles

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and pretty poem you have penned about the autumn mermaid. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very nice Mermaids
of how you give us such a beautiful image of a Mermaids tail with the colors of Autumn to picture in our minds as a rainbow.

Gert

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from B.B. Rose

Good

Sorry, but for me, your metaphor linking mermaid with autumn is an effective stretch -- even given poetic license. You have failed to make a compelling case. Sorry.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

No mermaids in a waterway linked to the sea? She sees the colorful trees? Oh well, not for everyone. Thanks for reading anyways. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A vivid poem with lots of color.
Well written, it says a lot in short form.
It describes the mermaid well.
Good luck with your writing.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine