With Honey
5-7-5 Nature14 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 about the bee and honey. You used very good descriptive wording and really good imagery with the video of the bee. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 about the bee and honey. You used very good descriptive wording and really good imagery with the video of the bee. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well done with the 5-7-5.
You've told a story while following the rules. Good show.
Good luck with your contest and future writing.
Sharon
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Well done with the 5-7-5.
You've told a story while following the rules. Good show.
Good luck with your contest and future writing.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
Comment from Mimi Linny
Ooooohhhh... The evil Venus flytrap, luring in her victim! The sinister lady traps her prey with ever so much sweetness! Great 5-7-5 poem! Vividly written! Enjoyed!
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Ooooohhhh... The evil Venus flytrap, luring in her victim! The sinister lady traps her prey with ever so much sweetness! Great 5-7-5 poem! Vividly written! Enjoyed!
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. There is one insect which I be er feel sorry to see them die. A fly can be such a nuisance when they fly around your head when you try to eat.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. There is one insect which I be er feel sorry to see them die. A fly can be such a nuisance when they fly around your head when you try to eat.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
