Comment from emptypage

Good

So very sad... the pretend calls, the terrible ache always in your heart, the never-ending loss.

Ricky, I wish you healing. Someday, somehow, I pray you find peace in this world before you move on to another.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thanks Page.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about messages from Jason from heaven, often bereaved dad received message at the attic and grandchild Alex talk with Jason and talks about play and joy in living; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thanks Al creator for your wonderful comment have a wonderful New Year doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from zekeziemann

Excellent

Good start despite the difficulty reading it without punctuation. The last paragraph caught my eye and I too an a Christian, God Bless and don't give up.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks Z for your kind thoughts and review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Another well written piece full of history and emotion. Each writing adds new information to let us know life and death and life again

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017

being in the same boat as me you have respect for life as well as death be nice to think that we get bodies at another time and get a second chance that death is not the end but the second beginning I'll write about it someday the second beginning and of course my son play part with the organs thanks dr. Ricky

Comment from sunao

Excellent

Awww.....to your grandson who gets upset when you talk about his uncle. I am sure that you will pass on all the memories of Jason to your grandson. Thank you so much for sharing. Please keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017

And yes this was a true experience with my grandson Alexander who when we're up there to Fisher-Price phone actually did ring you figure it out I didn't even know it had that capabilities have been sitting up in the attic and probably 25 years Ricky 1024

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Ricky,
This is a moving write that depicts relationship between father and son as time goes on. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017

I guess when you set up a church in your attic with the Bible in the Book of Mormon and you go up there with your 4 year old grandson to teach him in the phone rings on a Fisher Price toy phone that had been sitting up there 20 years you then say to yourself it's got to be my son call and who else could do that with his Jason I enjoyed that brief Little Couple our experience with me first conversing with my son and having an in teaching my grandson Alexander all about that thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from apky

Excellent

I dind't, for once, get what you were actually on about here, and I don't mean the punctuations. I mean the purpose and meaning:

I'm up in the up in the attic and the church cart with my grandson Alexander the commander to greatest Thomas choo-choo player on earth can I talk to my nephew or you can the phone to Alex imaginary conversation with his uncle in heaven which lasts about 5 minutes Alex if he's in school yet Alex if he's happy and that he wants to meet him someday that was four years ago today Alex has grown to the point where he's over 8 years old and over 120 lb to this very day he gets very upset if you talk about his Uncle Jason no I have no Wi-Fi service except for my cell phone so there's this will be added in later it consists of running sentences with no punctuation

a little over four years old when he ask(s) Papa

the Fisher-Price phone actually rang(rings? You need to keep the tense, unless you deliberately wanted to mix tenses) so I go to the phone

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017

Yeah my dear it's basically an experience that was unusual that happened four years ago with my grandson my attic is set up his church and also the other side would all my four daughters dolls so we have the church and we have Dolly land on that day we went up to the attic and went to the church to teach my grandson about religion a phone that was up there one of two rang which was a Fisher Price toy phone I answered it pretending that it was my son in Heaven speaking to me and then I gave the phone to my grandson who continue the conversation that was the basic gist of it thanks a lot Ricky 1024