FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "Chasing Run Away Stars""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from mkflood
Interesting poem and it does work well together. I do thank you again for selecting my work. It is truly an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
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Interesting poem and it does work well together. I do thank you again for selecting my work. It is truly an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again.. MKFlood
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
Comment from Asem.inspirations
I smiled whiled reading your poem because I remember doing exactly this, all of it. These are good and fun memories of me and my seven sisters, one brother and many other cousins, family and friends. The neighborhood children all would come around as we all had our own jars with the tops screwed on - hole were punched in the top so that the lightning bugs could breath. You even described catching them with our hands to release them. These are wonderful memories ans this was i wonderful poem.
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I smiled whiled reading your poem because I remember doing exactly this, all of it. These are good and fun memories of me and my seven sisters, one brother and many other cousins, family and friends. The neighborhood children all would come around as we all had our own jars with the tops screwed on - hole were punched in the top so that the lightning bugs could breath. You even described catching them with our hands to release them. These are wonderful memories ans this was i wonderful poem.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
Comment from RodG
I love the title which beautifully describes the actions of these children. It's fun to see how the Speaker catches on to the ritual of catching lightning bugs, but also identifies with them when he releases them. Nice blending of rhyme to give the poem a playful cadence.
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I love the title which beautifully describes the actions of these children. It's fun to see how the Speaker catches on to the ritual of catching lightning bugs, but also identifies with them when he releases them. Nice blending of rhyme to give the poem a playful cadence.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks stars from the sky have come to the earth for playing with the family, what a joy playing with the stars really where mom and dad are there, so free, it's a dream; I liked.
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This speaks stars from the sky have come to the earth for playing with the family, what a joy playing with the stars really where mom and dad are there, so free, it's a dream; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
Comment from Cybertron1986
This truly captured the essence of childhood...the wonder, the excitement, the energy. Brought me back to the time I waited for my mom to clean the front yard, and I spent my free time just observing the insects and wildlife outside on my own. Nicely presented and beautiful rhyme scheme that connects with readers of all ages.
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This truly captured the essence of childhood...the wonder, the excitement, the energy. Brought me back to the time I waited for my mom to clean the front yard, and I spent my free time just observing the insects and wildlife outside on my own. Nicely presented and beautiful rhyme scheme that connects with readers of all ages.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
