Student
A student infactuation.16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a real feeling for love of a lady teacher to an adolescent student who has shown some extra interest and intelligence in learning and making progress in studies; I liked.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This speaks a real feeling for love of a lady teacher to an adolescent student who has shown some extra interest and intelligence in learning and making progress in studies; I liked.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pantygynt
Interestingly the description line of this says it is "a student infactuation". Is that an accidental mis-spelling of infatuation or a fun play on words. I am intrigued. I am not quite sure that I understand the importance of the tomatoes being red too either.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Interestingly the description line of this says it is "a student infactuation". Is that an accidental mis-spelling of infatuation or a fun play on words. I am intrigued. I am not quite sure that I understand the importance of the tomatoes being red too either.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your comments, the first possible mistake was on purpose lol and because it was a fun joke I threw in the tomatoe line. I am not expecting to win but at least I will have provided some entertainment lol.
Comment from luther maddox
this is a very nice poem, many moments in this work reminds me of past romances, some were heartbreaking, and some I dreamed of loving forever. Then, there were moments I was at lost for words, and did not say what I should have said, let them walk away. You did well with this and I highly commend you, good work.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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this is a very nice poem, many moments in this work reminds me of past romances, some were heartbreaking, and some I dreamed of loving forever. Then, there were moments I was at lost for words, and did not say what I should have said, let them walk away. You did well with this and I highly commend you, good work.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and for sharing some thoughts.
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cool.
Comment from oliver818
This is a cool poem. And as a teacher I hope one someone writes a poem like that about me. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day. Good luck with the competition too
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This is a cool poem. And as a teacher I hope one someone writes a poem like that about me. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day. Good luck with the competition too
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments and good wishes, perhaps someone out there has good thoughts for you, teaching is a great contribution to society and the world.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about someone on Fanstory that impressed you as a new commercial and student with encouraging words and advice on your work that leads to having a crush on that person.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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A very well-written poem about someone on Fanstory that impressed you as a new commercial and student with encouraging words and advice on your work that leads to having a crush on that person.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much for your kind words and thoughts.
Comment from JanPerry
Yes. It it true u have a crush on me? (Kidding) no one ever likes me in real life.
Somehow its easier to like someone in theory than in practise and that's why we are so good with it!
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Yes. It it true u have a crush on me? (Kidding) no one ever likes me in real life.
Somehow its easier to like someone in theory than in practise and that's why we are so good with it!
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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LOL Jan one just never ever knows do they, I am sure you are super likeable. Thanks so much for your comments.
