seagulls circle
4/7/6 haiku35 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I don't know, but I bet Amtrack doesn't run there. Very good. There are so many variations of haiku it's hard to keep track of them all. I don't know how you do it.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I don't know, but I bet Amtrack doesn't run there. Very good. There are so many variations of haiku it's hard to keep track of them all. I don't know how you do it.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Thomas, I appreciate your review and feedback. Amtrak runs here and all over the USA.
gypsy
Comment from JanPerry
OK. So the haiku doesn't have to have three lines then?
I thought the setting out was what made it look so good as three lines does.
Your way is good too.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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OK. So the haiku doesn't have to have three lines then?
I thought the setting out was what made it look so good as three lines does.
Your way is good too.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I don't understand. My haiku has three lines, but haiku doesn't have to be three lines, in Japan they are one, two, or three lines. I like three lines and that is all I write. Thank you for the review and feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Sister. I had to laugh when I read this one sweetie. It is so darn true. Seagulls fly around looking for that next meal cause I don't believe they do anything else but eat. Wonderful haiku ... presentation awesome as well. You should write to me sometimes as I think we could have the most wonderful conversations. My head isn't always centered on ... well you know lol xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hello Sister. I had to laugh when I read this one sweetie. It is so darn true. Seagulls fly around looking for that next meal cause I don't believe they do anything else but eat. Wonderful haiku ... presentation awesome as well. You should write to me sometimes as I think we could have the most wonderful conversations. My head isn't always centered on ... well you know lol xoxo deborah
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hello, sister, thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. You can write to me any time.... gypsy hugs
Comment from TAB_that's me
Ah, nice ah ha moment. I like the satori play on words. Good interconnect lines and good imagery. I like the 4-7-6 form.
teresa
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Ah, nice ah ha moment. I like the satori play on words. Good interconnect lines and good imagery. I like the 4-7-6 form.
teresa
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Teresa, I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Gypsy;
I wonder what happened at the old Amtrak station that attracts the gulls? I enjoyed the photo you chose and the rhythm of your five/seven/five.
~patty~
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi, Gypsy;
I wonder what happened at the old Amtrak station that attracts the gulls? I enjoyed the photo you chose and the rhythm of your five/seven/five.
~patty~
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Patty, I appreciate your excellent review. :)
gypsy hugs
