Comment from sunao

Excellent

Wow! Thank you so much for sharing information about your son. I pray that God continues to give you a sense of peace from the loss of your son. Please keep up the great work and have a fabulous day!

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017

the actual rosenthal's you was talk to me buying writer that used to right here Cheryl Mel Woods she's the one who place the pennies in the vases she was from Australia that Gold Coast after about a year we didn't get along anymore she didn't respect me we did have a wonderful sharing experience up till then on fanstory thanks again Ricky 1024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I though this was a terrific read. Very interesting. I like the storytelling. The quotes at the start of each lie though did -- distract. But outside of that this was very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017

Thanks again Michael I emphasize important parts of my poetry with the Asterix another symbols to show further on an editor's notes that the the reasons why sis my particular style but you're not the first person that stated it was distracting thanks dr. Ricky 1024 hope you enjoyed it

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ricky.

Where you have the first "shiny" at the top, you have it as "shony."

Life is so fickle and you have painted it was with the red rose analogy.

I love the picture you have added... it is beautiful.

Well done, mate.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017

Thanks walu walu I added Shoney Penny to shiny penny I missed that one but I didn't use the spell check on this I thought I had it down pat thanks again dr. Ricky 1024