All Hallows Eve
A Rondeau16 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very good. Halloween is not a children's holiday anymore. It's been taken over by adults. Now, it's slutty dress-up holiday. What a shame. I loved Halloween when I was young.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Very good. Halloween is not a children's holiday anymore. It's been taken over by adults. Now, it's slutty dress-up holiday. What a shame. I loved Halloween when I was young.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Thomas, Thanks very much for your review and it is a shame that your Halloween is now a sluty dress up holiday ( love this descriptin LOL) I actually do not celebrate halloween as it is not an Australian tradition although it has crept in over the last few years and the kids seem to get into it more than the slutty adults. Appreciate your comments Cheers
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing your Halloween themed entry in the Rondeau poem contest. Your sentiments are true, but some of the lines read a bit shaky, as the rhythm isn't consistent throughout.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Thank you for sharing your Halloween themed entry in the Rondeau poem contest. Your sentiments are true, but some of the lines read a bit shaky, as the rhythm isn't consistent throughout.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Hi Patty, Thanks for this review and I have made some changes and hopefully the rhythm is now better Appreciate your time and comments Cheers
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your rondeau, "All Hallows Eve". You followed all the rules for this genre except in line thirteen - the devil's number. The word gen-er-ous has three syllables. Therefore line thirteen has nine syllables. You may wish to review this. Your poem flowed well and I liked your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your rondeau, "All Hallows Eve". You followed all the rules for this genre except in line thirteen - the devil's number. The word gen-er-ous has three syllables. Therefore line thirteen has nine syllables. You may wish to review this. Your poem flowed well and I liked your choice of picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Hi Marybell1 Thanks very much for your review and advice I have changed the generous to fun filled ( 2 syllables) so it is in keeping with correct syllable count I appreciate your help Cheers to you
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Hi Marybell1 Thanks very much for your review and advice I have changed the generous to fun filled ( 2 syllables) so it is in keeping with correct syllable count I appreciate your help Cheers to you
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed your Halloween rondeau poem. I particularly liked "ghosts in sheeting".
Very good rhyme. Well done. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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I really enjoyed your Halloween rondeau poem. I particularly liked "ghosts in sheeting".
Very good rhyme. Well done. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Hi jenintorre.Thank you for epreading and reviewing my poem for this contest and your good luck wishes are appreciated Cheers
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Hi jenintorre.Thank you for epreading and reviewing my poem for this contest and your good luck wishes are appreciated Cheers
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how is Halloween celebrated and who and how participate the Eve is full of scary images of handmade items and participators are gifted or given treats; I liked.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This speaks how is Halloween celebrated and who and how participate the Eve is full of scary images of handmade items and participators are gifted or given treats; I liked.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear. Many Thanks for your review and kind words I have a free afternoon and thought I would write some poerty and saw this contest so thought I would combine Halloween into a Rondeau for a challenge Cheers
Comment from oliver818
Nice Halloween poem, I enjoyed it. Well done on fitting it into the style of rondeau too. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Nice Halloween poem, I enjoyed it. Well done on fitting it into the style of rondeau too. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Hi oliver818 Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem for this contest. Just an afternoon with not so good weather so I thought a little writing may be in order I enjoy the challenge Cheers
