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Tragic ending

Her life

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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing your entry in the Joan D'arc contest. You certainly did your research. It is sad to contemplate her life, and all that she stood for. If I think about it, she is the first strong woman example I ever encountered.

Well done and good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    Yes, me too. Thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great write about the sacrifice she made in barbaric times and went down in history forever and the fact that we remember her still is testimony to her faith and resolve, a well written piece that I admire, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    I grew attached to her strength.
Comment from pbomar1115
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This was the very, very, very early time of civilization where power and control remained in the hands of narrow thinking which was the norm. We have come ways beyond burning at the stake but out thinking does still suffer.

Phillip

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    Yes. We should know better now.
reply by pbomar1115 on 25-Oct-2017
    Thanks.
Comment from Bichon
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An interesting story. You did a lovely job writing this, and described Joan and her personality in a great way. A nice touch adding the fact at the end too.

Chloe

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
    Thanks. I appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Fridayauthor
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This is an interesting treatment of an incident in history many of us have read about over the years. Your detail in this presentation is very good.

I wish you luck with the contest.

Line break after...and turn in my sleep.

Thank you.

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
    I only read about her once. Thanks for the tip!
Comment from Ricky1024
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Your new Jonah to our contest entry was very well-researched and presented similar to the supposed to rain today in raisings of Christ as he tried to bring his message of God Force but Joan even went further with defending France from England and amazingly enough the English rules Church rules were broken even though she was defending France and then France even turned against her and hand with the Bishops in the Nobles Joan of Arc and Archangel herself sent down to do one thing and one thing only save France from England it seems like England had dealings with a lot of countries even the Scottish as they would rape and felt that they deserved before man wed the woman they deserve the bed the woman down first the English History appears even though the Queen of England today is the same yourself the past is strewn with bitter domination over countries or wanting domination over countries of you wonder where the English back then got it in her head to the world almost Hitler when you think about it good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
    I read one play about her. Thankx for the rating.