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Just Ask

He will answer 5-7-5

68 total reviews 
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello L. Raven,
Lovely and inspirational piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, and beautifully depicting its theme!
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
It reminds me an incident of Swami Vivekanand, a renowned Indian / Hindu saint/monk, when he went to America in 1893 to attend the World Religious Conference and impressed everybody by his speech and style of addressing the gathering. After that, he was invited by people at several places to deliver the speech about Hindu Religion. Once on his way to the invited destination, at many places he found written, "God is nowhere." On reaching there he addressed the people, and said, "Somebody has misspelt. It is like this 'God is now here."
You are here absolutely right. 'Have an unflinching faith in God, and ask...He will answer.
Superb!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi RP, WOW!!!...and amazing review my sweet friend...and I love the story told...I know He is here...and I know He truly answers my prayers...if they are not answered...I know there is a reason why...and there is still time...LOL...I love this picture...thank you RP for a wonderful review...and all you lovely stars...love Linda xxoo
reply by RPSaxena on 21-Oct-2017
    L. Raven, Most Welcome!
    ~ RP
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    thank you RP...xxoo love
reply by RPSaxena on 22-Oct-2017
    L. Raven, Most Welcome!
    ~ RP
Comment from robyn corum
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Linda,

What a super message. I just wish everyone believed it. --sigh-- What on earth do people do that DON'T believe or look up or don't have church families to go to or don't have Christ to fall back on?? I don't get it. I. Just. Do. Not. Get. It.

Thanks for the day's inspiration! kisses!



 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi Robyn, I don't know about some people sweet girl...but I know at one point it will be to late with God...you have to live by His laws...or try...but you have to believe in Him...I don't get it either...sigh...thank you so much for a great review you...and you are so very welcome....love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from nancyrabbrose
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This is a beautifully written poem about faith in God's being here for us and helping us. The important thing in the poem is the reminder to ask. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    HI Nancy, I know He is here...and He will answer our prayers...you just have to ask sweet girl...thank you for a great review my friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Cass Carlton
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This is beautiful. I love the Artwork. I know it's a bit "chocolate box ish" but it agrees with my idea of Jesus. Tall, handsome and kind, with a gift of knowing what lies within the heart of the person He speaks to. I wonder what she asked Him and I wonder what He said to her. I look at that picture and imagine myself in her place,
looking up into His dark eyes and seeing the smile in them . Hearing His voice, calm and deep, and feeling the words He utters seeping like drops of water into my thirsty soul. Ah me, there I go again. Cheers Cass

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi Cass, WOW!!!!...I know He answers me Cass...not always...but I know that is for my own good...once again sweet girl...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...you are amazing...God Bless...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from GWinterwin
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Great picture with very true words. He always answers in his time and in his way. Sometimes people wonder why he isn't answering their prayers. He says in his word that he hears and answers the prayers of the righteous. Those striving to live for him in a right way. I truly believe the big problem is that people want to live for Satan until they need God and they expect him to hear and answer their prayers. God will not be mocked.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    HI George, I think some are waiting for the last day to believe...but it doesn't work that way...I know He answers me...I know He loves me...I love this picture...and thank yu for a wonderful review...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Oatmeal
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L.RAVEN,

Well written. Short and sweet...just like I like them! The theme was well thought out. This poem made for an enjoyable read. The line count is correct. The words you chose worked very well.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    HI Camille, thank you once again for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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You are so right my friend. If we just lay our problems at His feet He will see they are resolved. It may not be how you would do it but things get taken care of. That's why we must be careful what we ask for. LOL Nice poem Linda. xx Nancy

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi Nancy, I know just what you are saying...people need to trust in God...believe in Him...their lives would change...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Allyzeé
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I like how you only capitalized when talking about Him, it accentuates how important He is in our lives, with faith everything can be possible.
This is a really nice poem, it was refreshing to read it.
Best wishes
Allyzeé

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    Hi Allyze, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and best wishes to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Indeed God will answer what we ask. We need to listen though and the answer isn't always the one we want. Good to see you writing.

teresa

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi Teresa, thank you sweet girl...I know He answers most of what I ask...and the things He doesn't answer...I know are for my good...sigh...but I always figure there is more time...LOL...thank you for a great review you...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from crzypnter
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Hello dear Linda,

Here you are again. I really loved this one. So often people ask for things they really don't need and often forget that it's in His time. Which is not necessarily our time. God gives us what He thinks we need. Not always what we think we need. Thanks for sharing this one. I hope you get the chance to slow down and have a wonderful weekend. God bless
August

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    HI August, so good to see you my sweet friend...I hope I can slow down soon myself...thank you for your kindness...and you are sooooo right...if you ask He will answer...maybe not always...but I believe it is for our own good...and who knows...there's still time...LOL...thank you so much August for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...have a wonderful day...God Bless...love Linda xxoo