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Just Ask

He will answer 5-7-5

68 total reviews 
Comment from Walu Feral
Exceptional
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G'day Linda.

God must have told me to keep a six until today.

Perfect tiny little piece and it should have been in a contest. It would have won.

That is one of the problems with people... they don't invite Him in and then when something goes wrong in their lives they blame Him! Go figure.

Great job, mate.

Delia says Kumusta (Hi).

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    Hi Fez, this one was longer...LOL...I'm hoping to do longer next time....LOL...and you are so very right...people don't believe in Him...and when they ask of Him to help them...they don't understand why He doesn't...but I think He loves us all regardless ...truly Fez people better wake up...I think these are satans last days...thank you for a great review my sweet friend....and Kumusta to Delia...love Linda xxoo
Comment from mermaids
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This is an excellent faith based poem that teaches and reminds the reader to talk to God. The last line fits the first lines and you say much in the 5-7-5 form. There is a feeling of comfort in your words.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    Hi Elaine, thank you so much sweet girl for a great review...I know He answers us...maybe not every time...but I believe it is for our own good...sigh...I'm so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RGstar
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Lovely proverb, and if that simple should more people be doing so. Perhaps then this world would be a better place.
Nicely said.
Have a great day, author.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    HI Once again Roy, I wish more people would turn to God...the world would be a more peaceful place...sigh...thank you again my sweet friend for a great review...and you have a great evening...and best wishes to you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Linda
What a beautiful short but such a delightful and peaceful feeling I got when I read

believe God (Jesus)is here
knowing He walks by your side
ask... He will answer

Gert

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    HI Gert, I know He answers when we ask...maybe not all the time...but I believe that is for our good...thank you again sweet lady for a great review...love Linda xxoo
reply by Gert sherwood on 21-Oct-2017
    You are welcome Linda
    Gert
Comment from LIJ Red
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A strong faith five seven five, paraphrased from several scripture passages. A short but effective sermon. I admit I am not the wizard of haiku and 5/7/5, but this looks excellent to me.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    HI LIJ, thank you my friend a great review... I am so glad you like it...this was another picture I loved...have a wonderful evening...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Naturally I had to come and read this one after the delightful 3-5-3 I just read (and of course, because it is in a genre I love - yes, the picture drew me too). Inspirational and uplifting - what more could be asked of a poem of faith? Lovely!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
    HI Dawn, so good to see you my sweet friend...what a wonderful review Dawn...I am so glad you like it...I love this picture...I know He answers us sweet girl...and I know when he doesn't...it is for our own good...and then again...there is still time...LOL...thank you so much you...Love ya Linda xxoo
reply by Dawn Munro on 22-Oct-2017
    Yes, and yes. LOL. Love you too. xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
    smiling big...xxoo love
Comment from Octavia
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Lovely poem ( 5/7/5) on the power of belief. " Ask and ye shall receive" - yes! So true.
Beliefs have a way of becoming reality.
Well stated.
Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    Hi Octavia, thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from GracieAnn
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L R,
This is a perfectly syllabled 575 with more than just few words but also an impactful spiritual truth. How our country needs to embrace the simplicity of the Gospel! Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    Hi GraceAnn, yes our country does sweet girl...for some it will be to late...thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...smiling back at ya...love Linda xxoo
Comment from closetpoetjester
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Great inspirational poem Linda. Whilst I'm not a follower of Christian faith I understand that it IS exactly what is says and you must have it and put it out there for the opportunity to be given for Him to answer the call.

Once you are filled with His love I'm sure it's easy to be faith-full LOL

Lovely poem mate.
Hugs Phillippa xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    Hi Phillippa, thank you so much sweet girl for a wonderful review...and you are so right...you have to ask for Him to answer...thank you oh sweet one for allll your so lovely stars...love ya you...xxoo Linda
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a beautiful piece of spiritual poetry dear Linda! I so wish it is true. Next is,to believe it is true.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
    HI Rebekka, I know it's true...that if we ask He will answer...it may no be right away...but in His time it will happen...thank you for a great review sweet girl...Blessings...and big hugs to you too...love Linda...xxoo