Just a Bad Day
3-5-3 form67 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your fun. I enjoyed the story told in this tiny form and amplified by the neat picture. I hope the lad is not discouraged! Smiles and happy weekend when it arrives- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you for sharing your fun. I enjoyed the story told in this tiny form and amplified by the neat picture. I hope the lad is not discouraged! Smiles and happy weekend when it arrives- Joan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Joan, LOL...that's most likely his father giving him the ticket...LOL...I just love the picture... my grandson had a truck in the same size...my son put these big flood light on it...LOL...you could see him a mile away...so glad you enjoyed it sweet girl...thank you for a great review...smiling back at ya...and you have happy weekend as well...love to ya...Linda xxoo
Comment from Cedar
Hey Girl, now that's my kind of picture...the picture along with your words made me do something that I don't do enough of and that's "LAUGH." Thank you for that...
Sometimes I don't have a clue about what I'm going to write until I find that "perfect" picture and when I find it, the words just pop into my brain.
I've been lucky enough to win several contests over the years but honestly, I think the pictures are what won a lot of them.
Thanks again for the laugh, I needed that. Have a great weekend my friend...Take care...Bill
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hey Girl, now that's my kind of picture...the picture along with your words made me do something that I don't do enough of and that's "LAUGH." Thank you for that...
Sometimes I don't have a clue about what I'm going to write until I find that "perfect" picture and when I find it, the words just pop into my brain.
I've been lucky enough to win several contests over the years but honestly, I think the pictures are what won a lot of them.
Thanks again for the laugh, I needed that. Have a great weekend my friend...Take care...Bill
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Oh Bill, you didn't have to review it...although I am so grateful you did...I know you have such fun with the funny ones...I am so glad I could make you laugh...my grandson had a truck in a small size ...my son put these big flood light on it...LOL...you could see him a mile away..LOL...thank you my sweet friend...you have a great weekend as well...and take care...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL now this one takes the cake. You did a great piece on the picture and one that really made my day. Love the look on the faces. Perfect
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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LOL now this one takes the cake. You did a great piece on the picture and one that really made my day. Love the look on the faces. Perfect
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Barb, I love the picture...my son had a little truck like this one...my son put these big flood lights on it...but he had to stay on the side walk...LOL...I am so glad it made your day...thank you for an awesome review...love ya Linda xxoo
someone gave it a three star count...try said I didn't follow the contest rules...and my syllable count was wrong...I told her it was never in a contest...it was for fun...and I corrected the count form...they weren't wrong...I just wrote the wrong count down...but that didn't warrant a three star count...maybe a four...but it was never put in a contest...if your going to read the poem...read what goes a long with it...I don't normally great upset with the readers...most of the time just laugh things off...but it was her mistake...at least correct it...sigh...ok...see ya later...have a great one... love xxoo
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I know, that is why sometimes I get so upset and really want to just quit
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i mean't my grandson had one...lol
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I kept trying to tell her...but she never came back...sigh...xxoo
Comment from JennaG
Oh my gosh! I needed this today! The picture cracked me up and your words along with it made this such a fun piece. Perfect syllable count and I like the "p" alliteration. Well done! Thanks for bringing me a smile today. :)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Oh my gosh! I needed this today! The picture cracked me up and your words along with it made this such a fun piece. Perfect syllable count and I like the "p" alliteration. Well done! Thanks for bringing me a smile today. :)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Jenna, I love this picture as well...made me laugh too...I'm so glad it made you smile...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Pantygynt
I bet he has no license, no insurance, and he is probably under the influence and over the limit on coke (that's the brown booze, not the white powder). So even American policemen have a sense of humour, or did they shoot him later?
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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I bet he has no license, no insurance, and he is probably under the influence and over the limit on coke (that's the brown booze, not the white powder). So even American policemen have a sense of humour, or did they shoot him later?
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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LMAO you...Hi Jim, so good to see you sir...I saw the picture and had to use it...made me laugh...my son had one of these kind of cars...but he never got pulled over...but he never went off the sidewalk either...LOL...thank you for a awesome review my friend...have a great day Jim...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Very funny this made me smile lol we used to use trays to slide down hills with rope on them :) Kids today are so spoiled lol....brilliant write so funny my dear friend xxx love Meia xx
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Very funny this made me smile lol we used to use trays to slide down hills with rope on them :) Kids today are so spoiled lol....brilliant write so funny my dear friend xxx love Meia xx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi Meia, LOL...kids today have better sleds than a lot of peoples cars...LOL...I just love the picture...my grandson had a small truck like this car...my son put big flood lights on it...you could see him a mile down the road...LOL...I'm so happy it made you smile...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write, great scene and it made me laugh, starting to drive young and learn the ropes! I love fun poetry and this brightened my day, innocent fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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This is a fun write, great scene and it made me laugh, starting to drive young and learn the ropes! I love fun poetry and this brightened my day, innocent fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi Dolly, I'm so glad it made you laugh...I love the picture sweet girl...and I love the way the boy is leaning on the car as well...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good and unique 3-5-3 poem you have penned. Looks like the little guy got into trouble! lol Very good wording and good art work. I enjoyed it very much. This would have made a great contest entry! love, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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This is a very good and unique 3-5-3 poem you have penned. Looks like the little guy got into trouble! lol Very good wording and good art work. I enjoyed it very much. This would have made a great contest entry! love, Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Teri, I just wanted to use the picture...maybe next time I will contest one...I love the picture...my grandson had a truck in this size...LOL...I am so glad you enjoyed it...thank you sweet girl for a great review...love to ya ...Linda xxoo
someone gave it a three star count for not following the contest rules...I told her...IT WASN'T IN A CONTEST...I wrote the wrong syllable count on the description...but fixed it...that didn't warrant three stars...I waited for her to correct HER mistake...but she never came back...I don't normally get mad at the readers...but three stars is for a pretty bad poem...and I truly don't think this one is....anyway...on to the next one...have a great day you...xxoo love
Comment from teols2016
I can totally relate. No matter what happens, it sometimes doesn't pay to get up in the morning. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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I can totally relate. No matter what happens, it sometimes doesn't pay to get up in the morning. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi teols, I know I have those mornings...LOL...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from smileycloud
good 3/5/3 a very small space to get your message across
a great piece of humour
the words bring that pic to life
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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good 3/5/3 a very small space to get your message across
a great piece of humour
the words bring that pic to life
have a smiley day
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi Smileycloud, thank you again for a wonderful review...I love the picture...made me laugh...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
