Throw your arms around me
Together as one17 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, LOL...while I was reading this...I was getting into the rhythm of the song...the words...just wrap your arms around me...it's love...very well written you...and a great song...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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HI Waves, LOL...while I was reading this...I was getting into the rhythm of the song...the words...just wrap your arms around me...it's love...very well written you...and a great song...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much again Linda I always appreciate your reviews
dip
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your soooo welcome...as always you...love xxoo
Comment from Susanjohn
"Let our tongues flick in rhythm now
True lovers take it in"
Well well dear dipster! I'm so loving the imagery in this love poem of yours! Savoring the taste...oh my!..Nicely done and yet another wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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"Let our tongues flick in rhythm now
True lovers take it in"
Well well dear dipster! I'm so loving the imagery in this love poem of yours! Savoring the taste...oh my!..Nicely done and yet another wonderful poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Susan you are way too kind thankyou so much for the 6 They are nothing to your standard of writing love poems
dip
Comment from closetpoetjester
A lovely sing song poem dip and the only thing better than wrapping your arms around someone is wrapping your legs around them too haha
Whilst there were parts of this which felt they could be smoothed slightly, it still made for a lovely poem and I know you don't give a crap about meter so there is no point flogging a dead philly LOL
Still liked it LOL
Pxx
What's with the clip? You goin' all Hollywood?!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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A lovely sing song poem dip and the only thing better than wrapping your arms around someone is wrapping your legs around them too haha
Whilst there were parts of this which felt they could be smoothed slightly, it still made for a lovely poem and I know you don't give a crap about meter so there is no point flogging a dead philly LOL
Still liked it LOL
Pxx
What's with the clip? You goin' all Hollywood?!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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The daas were a group that had a tv show on The ABC back in the 90's
I going to write a poem dedicated to you called 'wrap your legs around'
Yeah fk the meter it reads ok when read aloud lol
Hey i was going to tell you something one of our fellow FanStorians has had a big whinge that the site is getting too much like a social network site and people are socializing too much instead of concentrating on poetry so in future I can only talk to you socially in rhyming innuendo ok lol
xxdip
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okay
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Dr D,
I enjoyed your poem. Good job with the rhymes, the smooth flow of lines, & the way you expressed your feelings.
The video was great. I am happy to see you post one now & then.
[sorry, for not reviewing your work lately. I was in the ER Monday night & haven't felt up to snuff & my right arm is sprained. So it is a little hard to type with 1 hand--good thing I'm a lefty. I fell & busted my head.] Jan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Dr D,
I enjoyed your poem. Good job with the rhymes, the smooth flow of lines, & the way you expressed your feelings.
The video was great. I am happy to see you post one now & then.
[sorry, for not reviewing your work lately. I was in the ER Monday night & haven't felt up to snuff & my right arm is sprained. So it is a little hard to type with 1 hand--good thing I'm a lefty. I fell & busted my head.] Jan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Wow I never knew this Jan. Here's hoping for a speedy recovery look after yourself that is more important than reviewing.
dip
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very sweet and romantic poem you have penned. It reminded me of the days when Tom and I were dating. Seems like forever, but it was nice like that. Very good wording, imagery and music. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Dip, This is a very sweet and romantic poem you have penned. It reminded me of the days when Tom and I were dating. Seems like forever, but it was nice like that. Very good wording, imagery and music. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Teri. I am glad it brought back memories.
dip
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you are so welcome Dip! Have a great weekend!
Comment from robyn corum
Dip,
'Let our tongues flick in rhythm now'??
That is disgusting... eccck!!
Some things are better experienced than talked about, don't you think?? Weird how that works. Ugh!!!!
Gross!! Gag. Patooie!!
Hahahahaha!!!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Dip,
'Let our tongues flick in rhythm now'??
That is disgusting... eccck!!
Some things are better experienced than talked about, don't you think?? Weird how that works. Ugh!!!!
Gross!! Gag. Patooie!!
Hahahahaha!!!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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oh come on Robyn! lol its a poem people write that stuff all the time surely you aren't such a prude lol
Do you want me to remove the line? lol So when you kiss your lover is it only a peck on the cheek? of course not its a deep passionate tongue flicked kiss haha.
xdip
Comment from sandy montgomery
Another love poem and this does not disappoint. Love the addition of the music to your presentation. Very well done. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Another love poem and this does not disappoint. Love the addition of the music to your presentation. Very well done. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks again Sandy much appreciated
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! This could be a song and I heard the melody, an intense and romantic write Dip, hearts beating together sounds good too! Best Wises, Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Wow! This could be a song and I heard the melody, an intense and romantic write Dip, hearts beating together sounds good too! Best Wises, Love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Dolly the title of the poem was inspired by the accompanying video.
dip
Comment from TAB_that's me
Not only a lovely love poem as always but a hint of erotica as well with the tongues flick part. Perfect rhyme and meter.
teresa
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Not only a lovely love poem as always but a hint of erotica as well with the tongues flick part. Perfect rhyme and meter.
teresa
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Terese much appreciated as always
dip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
An excellent ABAB done just the smooth way that you always do. I admire the form and the ease you write these and make them perfect
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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An excellent ABAB done just the smooth way that you always do. I admire the form and the ease you write these and make them perfect
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks Barb your reviews always mean a lot to me
dip
