Standing is for the strong
our leaders must stand up for us and ours50 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Many of our so called leaders are nothing more than lackeys for the special interest who pay their way to line their pockets. If they were really important, they would leave leadership before the make total fools of themselves which many of then have already done. Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Many of our so called leaders are nothing more than lackeys for the special interest who pay their way to line their pockets. If they were really important, they would leave leadership before the make total fools of themselves which many of then have already done. Patricia
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. I made me think of also the line if you don't stand for something you will fall for anything. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. I made me think of also the line if you don't stand for something you will fall for anything. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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you are so welcome!
Comment from B.B. Rose
Should entries for this contest be a regular sentence as in the example? If so, cap letter on your first word, take out the comma (it is incorrect) and put a period at the end. It's a fine sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
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Should entries for this contest be a regular sentence as in the example? If so, cap letter on your first word, take out the comma (it is incorrect) and put a period at the end. It's a fine sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you and have done what you suggested I am unsure however of what you mean by a period at the end, and even with this good advice not sure why only 4 stars but thank you****kahpot
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I gave you four because of your lack of punctuation. A period at the end is .
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Thank you for taking time to reply and answer much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from DR DIP
I really like these words and your author's notes as they are so true.
Yes! Stand for the future or don't stand at all Should be the platform for all political leaders.
dip
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I really like these words and your author's notes as they are so true.
Yes! Stand for the future or don't stand at all Should be the platform for all political leaders.
dip
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from rama devi
Potently voiced. If we don't stand now, we won't be able to later. Having leaders who care about our future (climate change, etc.) is so crucial right now. Intense insight and conviction, as needed in our time. Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
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Potently voiced. If we don't stand now, we won't be able to later. Having leaders who care about our future (climate change, etc.) is so crucial right now. Intense insight and conviction, as needed in our time. Good luck in the contest.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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:-))
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
Brilliantly said in this one liner.
Sadly, at the moment, it looks to me that the world is full of maniac leaders and they don't care what the hell they say or do.
Sorry to rant but you hit a chord with me.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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G'day mate.
Brilliantly said in this one liner.
Sadly, at the moment, it looks to me that the world is full of maniac leaders and they don't care what the hell they say or do.
Sorry to rant but you hit a chord with me.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and it is not a rant you are quite correct****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the most key words in a sentence poem, the most wanted, commonly appreciable, bold and practical thoughts for man, the leaders who must stand up for us and ours; I liked. (6-STAR)
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This speaks the most key words in a sentence poem, the most wanted, commonly appreciable, bold and practical thoughts for man, the leaders who must stand up for us and ours; I liked. (6-STAR)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Wow, thank you very much and I wish they would stand up****kahpot
Comment from Sis Cat
Amen to this, "Stand for our future, or don't stand at all." You cannot get much more clearer than this with your statement which reads like a bumper sticker or a T-shirt slogan. Your words are well chosen to deliver the impact of your message.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.
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Amen to this, "Stand for our future, or don't stand at all." You cannot get much more clearer than this with your statement which reads like a bumper sticker or a T-shirt slogan. Your words are well chosen to deliver the impact of your message.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, maybe we should give t-shirts to our leaders****kahpot
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, it's clear and to the point. I like the strong message it has. The photo also fits very well with the whole thing. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition
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Nice poem, it's clear and to the point. I like the strong message it has. The photo also fits very well with the whole thing. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Agree! We seem to have developed a culture of lifetime politicians who seem intent only to make use of power for their own interests. Great work giving a strong message in one line that resonates with many!
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Agree! We seem to have developed a culture of lifetime politicians who seem intent only to make use of power for their own interests. Great work giving a strong message in one line that resonates with many!
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
