Price of life
Poem 5-7-5 Life4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Price of Life, has the correct syllable set up and reminds us that we are just passing through these parts. There won't be a return trip.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This 5-7-5, Price of Life, has the correct syllable set up and reminds us that we are just passing through these parts. There won't be a return trip.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Yes no return trip on this journey !! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from angel123
Your 5-7-5 poem about life flows well with meaning and I enjoyed reading it. I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Your 5-7-5 poem about life flows well with meaning and I enjoyed reading it. I like your artwork choice. It goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for critique zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks briefly but comprehensively what is life; obviously it is something exciting indeed but its journey goes through only a one way and ticket is a must; I liked.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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This speaks briefly but comprehensively what is life; obviously it is something exciting indeed but its journey goes through only a one way and ticket is a must; I liked.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
That's true. :) Very creative. I think you have managed to say quite a bit with just three lines. This does a good job of sticking with the theme of the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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That's true. :) Very creative. I think you have managed to say quite a bit with just three lines. This does a good job of sticking with the theme of the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review zanya
