Life Principle
Soul leaving the body8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
The picture is perfect for your poem. Nice overall presentation. Check the title, 'prinicple' is not a word. Perhaps you mean principle
Life our soul within... 5
it is who we have become 7
leaves when we are done 5.....good job with the syllable count
Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hello, my friend,
The picture is perfect for your poem. Nice overall presentation. Check the title, 'prinicple' is not a word. Perhaps you mean principle
Life our soul within... 5
it is who we have become 7
leaves when we are done 5.....good job with the syllable count
Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the catch. That is what I get form entering near midnight.
Comment from angel123
Your 5-7-5 poem about life is very profound, sorry I used all my six stars. This is a six-star poem. It is well-written and it flows with an interesting topic and a great picture. Your poem is well received and I love your message and your good use of alliteration of w words.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Your 5-7-5 poem about life is very profound, sorry I used all my six stars. This is a six-star poem. It is well-written and it flows with an interesting topic and a great picture. Your poem is well received and I love your message and your good use of alliteration of w words.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thanks much your encouragement is more important than the stars. Appreciate it.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Excellent five - seven - five makes an understandable and worthwhile point - our soul is what we have become. Even incorporates a rhyme. Great artwork. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Excellent five - seven - five makes an understandable and worthwhile point - our soul is what we have become. Even incorporates a rhyme. Great artwork. Good job!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you much for your read and comments.
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You're welcome
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem " Life Principle" You chose an interesting topic and you chose a very appropriate picture, though you may wish to check your spelling in the title.
All the best.
Marybel1.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem " Life Principle" You chose an interesting topic and you chose a very appropriate picture, though you may wish to check your spelling in the title.
All the best.
Marybel1.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
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Thank you much for your read and comments.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from GracieAnn
This 5-7-5 life submission is well constructed with the correct syllable count. a strong and consistent theme that communicates a universal truth. Typically, rhyming is not required, but in this case gives closure. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This 5-7-5 life submission is well constructed with the correct syllable count. a strong and consistent theme that communicates a universal truth. Typically, rhyming is not required, but in this case gives closure. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Very deep and insightful piece that provides that philosophical perspective to the mysterious afterlife. I like how it brings it to question in a creative perspective that challenges thought. Nicely done
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Very deep and insightful piece that provides that philosophical perspective to the mysterious afterlife. I like how it brings it to question in a creative perspective that challenges thought. Nicely done
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments.
Comment from jenintorre
I really love this 5-7-5 poem. It is so true and so spiritual. I loved the last line.
It truly deserves a six star rating. I wish you good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I really love this 5-7-5 poem. It is so true and so spiritual. I loved the last line.
It truly deserves a six star rating. I wish you good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Again, thanks so much for you encouraging words.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables.
Excellent message and description of life and the soul
Good choice of art work to match poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables.
Excellent message and description of life and the soul
Good choice of art work to match poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging words.
