Comment from beizanten

Good

A beautiful picture of a girl and her unicorn.So the unicorn is her imaginary friend right? Short, dimple yet interesting and well written in an easy to understand words. Keep up the great work!

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Mermaids, I agree with you, fantasy can take us to a stress-free world. Please send that beautiful unicorn my way.

I am fascinated with unicorn. In college, I used to collect pictures and figurines of unicorns. Reading this poem reminds me of my college days.

Thank you for sharing, Mermaids.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

I am honored by your review. Unicorns are so beautiful and just looking at them takes away stress. More unicorn poems to come. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

Where would we be without fantasy. I'm glad the unicorn's there for you when you need it. Your words definetly illustrate the change the creature bestows on you when you're stressed. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Oh yes, I love the fantasy world where I don't have to work and all is provided for me without stress and pain. mind you, you do have to be careful when hugging unicorns as impalement is always a possibility...

Nice piece
GMG

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you so much for sharing your free verse. Beautiful unicorns and thoughts of their glowing hides can certainly take away the stresses of life. Well done.

~patty~

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Seems like a stress reliever, a way to quell those fears when they threaten to take control.

Beautifully presented with a restful green background. With an attractive white unicorn and young girl in paint.

Good poem.

~Mel~

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Yes, the point of the poem is to relive stress. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

It would be nice if we all had a unicorn to take our stress away.
Well written. A lot said in a short poems.
Good luck with your writing.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids

Love the words of you poem and did you notice the look of love and the feeling of sincere caring love in the unicorn's
weeping eye.

Gert

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written free verse poem. When life seems to get too much forbidden s to handle we can depend on the unicorn to give us comfort in our time of distress.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

I would call this a response to the picture and would like to see even more description although the subjective feeling is pleasant. I wish I had this presentation for my own unicorn poem, Its a good presentation.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks for a great review. Elaine