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Veronica is sent back again

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Sandra, so good to see you my sweet friend...don't cut this short for me...LOL...bring it on...ok...now we have to find the albino man...maybe Frances isn't Sir John's son...hmmmmm...boy do I have an imagination...LOL...No!!!! not Lady Gwendolyne...he has to be somewhere in...or never the church...we find one....and lose the other...LOL...a great chapter sweet girl...I love the picture...I think I saw the albino adult man peeking around one of the trees...very well written you...love you sooooooo much...xxoo Linda

how is Ian doing on his trip????...tell him I said to go easy...and I hope Sarah is still on the heal...take care to you all...always in my prayers...and Hi to Ian...love to all

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Hi Linda, my smile maker!! No, I wouldn't cut it short for you, I know you love looooooong parts to read. LOL. You wouldn't happen to have come across a wandering albino man and stashed him away somewhere, would you?? I appear to have lost one! Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my dear friend, and another of your lovely fun reviews. Sending much love back, dear friend. :) Sandra xxxxxx

    I haven't heard anything from Ian, so I'm taking it that he is too busy enjoying himself, which I truly hope he is. Sarah has decided to go for the full mastectomy now, and we are all glad. Why keep something that is making you sick and could possibly eventually kill you? They can do so much nowadays to make her look feminine, and she is still too young to live under the threat of it returning all the time. Thanks for asking my friend. I always pass on your messages to them both. Big hugs.

    How about you? How are you doing now? I know you've been through a lot, but I also know God is watching over you. (I have a direct line! :)) You take care, bigger hugs. Sandra xxxxx
reply by l.raven on 18-Oct-2017
    hey you, I have three...two nephews ...one niece...albinos...hair as white as snow...and never changed from the days they were born...beautiful kids...had to come from their mothers side...we were a bunch of red heads...but beautiful I must say...LOL...

    so glad to here Ian is enjoying himself...and I think that is the right thing to do...I read somewhere of a woman who had ...I think it was 6or7 sisters...all died from breast cancer...her were healthy...but she wanted them removed...she had to go to court to get a dr. to do it...and she did...and had them removed...I don't blame her...she will be fine...just don't wait to long...

    I am doing fine...still dealing with my home...the people who lived here before me smoked heavy...I didn't smell it when I first came in...they sprayed for showing...so it is in everything...and because of my allergies...I can only us so much to get it out...I have replace the floors and painted soooooo much in here...but still have a ways to go...sigh....and on top of that...I'm not getting any younger...LOL...other wise I stay very close to God...I know He is helping me...I hope you are staying in good health...and all is fine...keep smiling you...say hi to Ian for me when you see him...or here from him...love you sooooo much...your often in my thoughts...xxoo Linda
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Sandra

= When my brother and I were growing up, 'thataway' was a common word we used.
= LOL ... we never knew it was a slang form of a direction. We led a sheltered life when I was down home country in Ohio. (*<*)
= Excellent chapter about the albino. Your verbiage is always spot-on as well. Nice job.

Cheers (*<*)
Have a great day/evening!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much, Jackie. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I hope you are feeling a lot better now, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Wow an answer so close and yet so far away. Probaby the answer is in pain sight . Very well written and excellent interaction.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you, Barb, for your lovely review. I'm afraid Veronica has her work cut out for a while. :( It'll keep her busy anyway! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
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What a disappointment for both Joe and Veronica, seeking out the possibility of there being a living adult albino actually in existence is proving to be hard work for the dear people. Excellent episode Sandra, this excerpt is proving how possible it is to morph into a very good and imaginative author you are my friend, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much, my sweet friend. What a lovely thing to say. Veronica has some work to do now, but first, she has to find out if the albino did actually exist, if he did, where is he? We will have to wait and see. lol! Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxx
reply by royowen on 18-Oct-2017
    Exciting huh. Whatever it is, it will be good!
Comment from frogbook
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Well, I have been behind for a while but I really enjoyed this part of the story and helping Joe to discover that there are those who are different. Will be waiting to see where this new soul is..

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much for coming along, JoAnn. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Veronica has some detective work to do. lol! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Curly Girly
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Hi, Sandra.
This chapter was a good continuation from last time, and I hope they find him.
It must have been such a burden back in the old days to be born with anything wrong--people were so superstitious and cruel.
In Africa, I saw many black albinos over the years, but only last week, for the first time that I'm aware of, I saw a white albino. I have to say, I just couldn't take my eyes off him! And I kept thinking of this story. His skin was snow white, so was his hair, eyelashes and eyebrows. Not a freckle in sight. He was so white that I swear he would have shone in the dark if the lights went out. His eyes were blue but I reckon they might have been red when he was born. The young man, in his mid-twenties, was working behind the counter at a hardware mega-store.
Nicole

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    I can imagine how he must have looked. I've never met one, let alone seen one. I think I'd be the same as you, staring! It must be hard for them to be accepted. Someone else mentioned black albinos, apparently, they have reddish hair? and other skin colour changes. I've read that sometimes the red eyes can change to a pale blue or pale brown and their skin can gain a tiny bit of colour. Another thing, they have to be very careful in the sun as they are particularly prone to skin cancer and blindness. Not a happy life from all accounts.
    Thank you, Nicole, for your lovely review and sharing your first sighting of a white albino. Fascinating!! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra. xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I would suppose the albino will turn out to be the one she is trying to help which means she will be successful getting him there but how long will it take? It's just another time thing.
Good job Sandra. xxx Nancy

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    LOL, good guess, my friend. We will see! lol. It is all about time, and how things turn out. Thank you so much, Nancy, for your lovely insightful review. But, Oh, Lordy, Nancy, I'll not be sayin' if yous right or not! Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from JDRBAR
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Another great chapter in a great story. You do an excellent job of transversing the difference in the centuries. Poor Joe. He must be greatly disappointed.

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Aw thank you, my friend. Yes, Joe and Veronica are both upset now. We will have to wait and see what develops now. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my book, thanks, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sandra, this is a marvellous chapter. Veronica has really got him on her side, but now she's coming up against an obstacle.
Had James got it wrong? I sincerely hope not. = I sincerely hoped not.
Good Lord, what would happen if he had got it wrong?
Can't wait to reading on. A big hug. Ulla xxxx

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    If James has got it wrong, it will be very difficult for Joe to find a way out of his present predicament. Veronica will be very busy now. Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, my dear friend, and the lovely review. I do appreciate them both. And you! Bi hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from apky
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I am still thrilled with your story, Sandra. You certainly know how to weave this kind of story, always coming up with new bends and twists for the reader at moments they least expect them.

Well done.

"It's when the mother and father passes on things to their child. But sometimes, some of those things get a bit mixed up. It's like getting the ingredients of a cake wrong, so it doesn't come out of the oven looking the way it should.(")
BTW, I loved your explanation!

If he met an adult Albino, and one who is living a religious life, it might stop him thinking the worst like you did."(line break here)
"Sure, it ain't that far from here. Shall we go now, or do you want to wait 'till t'morrow?"

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you so very much, my friend, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you spotted the missing (") I don't know how I missed that, AND I've read it through several times! I've also put back the line break. I think I've been having a few 'senior' moments. lol. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by apky on 19-Oct-2017
    Always welcome, Sandra.
    You wanted to have a look at my books that I've post here and are already in print, I think? Below are two.

    https://www.amazon.com/Golden-Shana-Chase-Von-KOry/dp/1511638451
    https://www.amazon.com/Golden-Shana-Capture-Von-KOry/dp/1511638508
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    Hi Shana, I'm reading Sweet Chaos at the moment, up to chapter nine. Jace has been for counselling, and his dad, Alexander looks to be coming for either Jace or Jem. I'm really enjoying it. It's my bedtime read! I'll be ordering the second one when I've finished this one. It's really good. I'll put a review on there for you when I've finished this book. xxx
reply by apky on 20-Oct-2017
    Hullo Sandra,

    I think your answer above wasn't for me but for another writer, Shana. I've never written a book called Sweet Chaos.

    Warmest,
    Akinyi
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Hi, I think something has gone wrong with the names here. I've copied and pasted the replies we've shared, and it looks as if this has come from you. I don't know who I'm writing to now!, lol, are you the one who sent the quesion or the other one. This is most confusing. xxxx

    you replied on 18-Oct-2017
    Thank you so very much, my friend, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you spotted the missing (") I don't know how I missed that, AND I've read it through several times! I've also put back the line break. I think I've been having a few 'senior' moments. lol. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx - Edit Reply

    reply by apky on 19-Oct-2017

    Always welcome, Sandra.
    You wanted to have a look at my books that I've post here and are already in print, I think? Below are two.

    https://www.amazon.com/Golden-Shana-Chase-Von-KOry/dp/1511638451
    https://www.amazon.com/Golden-Shana-Capture-Von-KOry/dp/1511638508


    you replied on 19-Oct-2017

    Hi Shana, I'm reading Sweet Chaos at the moment, up to chapter nine. Jace has been for counselling, and his dad, Alexander looks to be coming for either Jace or Jem. I'm really enjoying it. It's my bedtime read! I'll be ordering the second one when I've finished this one. It's really good. I'll put a review on there for you when I've finished this book. xxx - Edit Reply

    reply by apky on 20-Oct-2017

    Hullo Sandra,

    I think your answer above wasn't for me but for another writer, Shana. I've never written a book called Sweet Chaos.

    Warmest,
    Akinyi
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    I've just sent you a PM. :) xx