Football Confession
22 syllables per line,symbolize 22-player lines of scrimmage3 total reviews
Comment from Lucian Carter
I'm not a fan so maybe some of this is lost on me. It's a workable acrostic, the "a" line feels a bit wonky to me. What starts as an ode to the game changes to something that's even more important. A good ending to a good poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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I'm not a fan so maybe some of this is lost on me. It's a workable acrostic, the "a" line feels a bit wonky to me. What starts as an ode to the game changes to something that's even more important. A good ending to a good poem.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your very encouraging review.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Pretty good job on the Acrostic poem! Loved the story it told about your love of football, peace with all distractions gone, but still, in the end, silently revealing that you've missed the sounds of your wife and girls! Your poem flowed pretty well and had good rhyming scheme. Very much enjoyed!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Pretty good job on the Acrostic poem! Loved the story it told about your love of football, peace with all distractions gone, but still, in the end, silently revealing that you've missed the sounds of your wife and girls! Your poem flowed pretty well and had good rhyming scheme. Very much enjoyed!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your careful reading and understanding comments, Mimi. I'm very glad you enjoyed the poem.
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You're welcome! Again, great job!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your acrostic about Football. You've done a good job with spelling out your chosen word, and all of your lines relate back to your joy to be able to watch the season without interruption, and then there's your sadness about missing your family.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your acrostic about Football. You've done a good job with spelling out your chosen word, and all of your lines relate back to your joy to be able to watch the season without interruption, and then there's your sadness about missing your family.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Patty, for your excellent review, showing a thorough reading and complete understanding of my football acrostic poem. I'm very appreciative of that.
