FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from RGstar
A good strong delivery with keywords installed in startegic places in bringing forth an acrostic worth remembering.
My best wishes. Well done.
RGstar
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A good strong delivery with keywords installed in startegic places in bringing forth an acrostic worth remembering.
My best wishes. Well done.
RGstar
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from peculiar2011
Thank you for your poem. I love it. Almost everyone in my family is or has been a teacher (including me). A rewarding career for the teacher and pupil.
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Thank you for your poem. I love it. Almost everyone in my family is or has been a teacher (including me). A rewarding career for the teacher and pupil.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from ScarletAffliction
H is for HOMEWORK that our dogs never eat.
E is for EACH STUDENT studying quietly in each seat.
R is for RIGHT ANSWERS when your teacher calls your name.
S is for SCHOLARS and the diplomas that we claim.
Teachers are awesome! We have lots of teachers in our family and they work harder than may people do. Your poem showed a little of what they try to use to accomplish their role. Nice job!!
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H is for HOMEWORK that our dogs never eat.
E is for EACH STUDENT studying quietly in each seat.
R is for RIGHT ANSWERS when your teacher calls your name.
S is for SCHOLARS and the diplomas that we claim.
Teachers are awesome! We have lots of teachers in our family and they work harder than may people do. Your poem showed a little of what they try to use to accomplish their role. Nice job!!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic, TEACHERS, follows the vertical theme and brings the responsibilities of all share holders in for a look. Teamwork is indeed the need in education.
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This acrostic, TEACHERS, follows the vertical theme and brings the responsibilities of all share holders in for a look. Teamwork is indeed the need in education.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Poetic Friend
Great acrostic written about individuals who deserved the utmost respect and regards -- teachers.
I love this line: H is for HOMEWORK that our dogs never eat. Are children still using that excuse for not submitting their homework?
Also, I love this line as well: TEAMWORK in class with the greatest coach. It all begins with a good leader to encourage teamwork.
The repetition works well in this poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Great acrostic written about individuals who deserved the utmost respect and regards -- teachers.
I love this line: H is for HOMEWORK that our dogs never eat. Are children still using that excuse for not submitting their homework?
Also, I love this line as well: TEAMWORK in class with the greatest coach. It all begins with a good leader to encourage teamwork.
The repetition works well in this poem.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Hello Poetic Friend: Our school teachers are the, "BOMB", (tremendously wonderful) aren't they. I've had quite a lot of them, female, and male. And I love them all. If were not for them I wouldn't be writing this review reply. Our teachers are soooo amazingly inventive. My fifth grade teacher was a perfect example. She had a way in her admonishment that I've never forgotten. She made us do what she called: writing sentences. Example: "I will complete and turn in my homework." Write this sentence 100 times." Then she'd ask: "What is a sentence?" And I would reply: "A group of words that makes sense.." Then she'd say: " I'm proud of you, Rhonnie. It pleases me to see that I haven't wasted my time on you, altogether. After you've finished your homework tonight, you will begin writing that sentence 100 times. They will be written on, NEWS PAPER. And I will be able to see them clearly. If not, WE'LL try again. I HOPE they'll make SENSE to you, Rhonnie. After I had written that sentence for the first two or three times: I'd gotten her drift. What a signifying and helpful way she had of expressing her love for me. Real cool, huh, Poetic Friend" Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Ogden
Congratulations, Rhonnie, on your well-deserved first-place finish in the acrostic poem contest. Your writing is very clever, and right on target (I took a peek at your profile).
Don (Ogden)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Congratulations, Rhonnie, on your well-deserved first-place finish in the acrostic poem contest. Your writing is very clever, and right on target (I took a peek at your profile).
Don (Ogden)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Hello Ogden: Thank you for your encouraging review. It wasn't my writing that was very clever. But it was my teachers' inspiration passing from my heart, to my pen, and then to my blank sheet of paper. The result, :BOOM!" Here you see it.
Thank you for your helpful comments and stars. They are a clear evidence that what my teachers taught me was worth my cooperation, which has paid off. Thank you, teachers. And you too, Ogden. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome, Rhonnie.
Don
Comment from Dean Kuch
Teachers are the foundations where all of a child's future dreams are either built and encouraged, or dashed and destroyed.
Obviously there are good teachers as well as bad.
But I'd like to think there are far more teachers who care than do not.
Great acrostic poem, Rhonnie.
Congratulations on your win.
~Dean
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Teachers are the foundations where all of a child's future dreams are either built and encouraged, or dashed and destroyed.
Obviously there are good teachers as well as bad.
But I'd like to think there are far more teachers who care than do not.
Great acrostic poem, Rhonnie.
Congratulations on your win.
~Dean
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
How sweet, I'm glad you've written this great verse for the teachers that have made a difference in your life. I think they are a very professional group of people who often go above and beyond. This is a well-written acrostic and your word choices are very true and kind. I saw no errors and wish you all the best with your writing, Ana.
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How sweet, I'm glad you've written this great verse for the teachers that have made a difference in your life. I think they are a very professional group of people who often go above and beyond. This is a well-written acrostic and your word choices are very true and kind. I saw no errors and wish you all the best with your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Teacher's", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is a six, but I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
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"Teacher's", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is a six, but I only have fives left. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent acrostic poem in recognition of the fantastic work teachers do, Rhonnie. I'm a big fan of teachers too, and I certainly hope they start getting the salaries and benefits they earned and deserved instead of budgets being continually lopped down even more.
A fine poem and well deserved win for you. :)
Gloria
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Excellent acrostic poem in recognition of the fantastic work teachers do, Rhonnie. I'm a big fan of teachers too, and I certainly hope they start getting the salaries and benefits they earned and deserved instead of budgets being continually lopped down even more.
A fine poem and well deserved win for you. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
