Together
A love poem21 total reviews
Comment from Natali Holden
Especially recently I have been reading a lot of wonderful poems posted for this contest. I can't wait to see who wins, although it will probably be some poem I didn't even see before. But, I would love for it to be this one. I love it when people say this about my poems and for 'Together', it happened with me. Your beautiful poem made me smile. Exceptional work! Best of wishes in the contest!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Especially recently I have been reading a lot of wonderful poems posted for this contest. I can't wait to see who wins, although it will probably be some poem I didn't even see before. But, I would love for it to be this one. I love it when people say this about my poems and for 'Together', it happened with me. Your beautiful poem made me smile. Exceptional work! Best of wishes in the contest!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Natali! You made my day with your smile.
Comment from Oatmeal
POETWATCH,
Your arrangement here is very creative. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, enjoyable and thrilling. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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POETWATCH,
Your arrangement here is very creative. The flow was good. The theme was excellent! Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, enjoyable and thrilling. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings. They were very understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Oatmeal. I'm just a mortal man that makes mistakes, but I always write from my heart... and to your heart.
Comment from RGstar
Togetherness in something that was meant to be, ordained. When love is like this, there is cause for joy, from all who could be touched by such.
Bravo.
Good luck with your entry.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Togetherness in something that was meant to be, ordained. When love is like this, there is cause for joy, from all who could be touched by such.
Bravo.
Good luck with your entry.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, RGstar. What is meant to be shall be. I found the other part of my soul.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem. A true lover gives all to a lover without expecting anything back except their happiness is more important than anything else even when it us not with us.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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A very well-written love poem. A true lover gives all to a lover without expecting anything back except their happiness is more important than anything else even when it us not with us.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Sandra. As long as you share your happiness and it makes you feel good, that is what matters. Yet, sometimes tears effect the way we feel, but one should always try to smile. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse love poem, Together, captures the Essenes of a couple's love for each other and their three children. This kind of love shines out to us from those few who have gone through it all and are stronger and closer,
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This free verse love poem, Together, captures the Essenes of a couple's love for each other and their three children. This kind of love shines out to us from those few who have gone through it all and are stronger and closer,
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Bill. I'm happy you have love with you in your heart.
Comment from royowen
I think that unconditional love is the only treasure that transcends all treasures, the only thing the endures and brings true happiness, whereas all other treasures will pass away. Well done, and beautifully written written narrative that is deftly manicured and sweetly Scented with love's essence. Well scribed free verse entry in this contest. Good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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I think that unconditional love is the only treasure that transcends all treasures, the only thing the endures and brings true happiness, whereas all other treasures will pass away. Well done, and beautifully written written narrative that is deftly manicured and sweetly Scented with love's essence. Well scribed free verse entry in this contest. Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Roy. I usually rhyme my poems, but I didn't like the sing song I was getting. I just wrote this from my heart.
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Well done
Comment from jenintorre
A very romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It had good rhythm and flow and a beautiful message. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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A very romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It had good rhythm and flow and a beautiful message. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you. I just write what I feel at the moment, making mistakes, but always trying to bring out what I write.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice love poem you have penned from the heart. It made me think of when I first got married and how much in love we were. We are still in love, but in a deeper way now. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This is a very nice love poem you have penned from the heart. It made me think of when I first got married and how much in love we were. We are still in love, but in a deeper way now. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Terri. Yes, I wrote this from my heart and at the moment.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about love and living together, they think they also loved each other in heaven, they came on earth to live together in love, though all needs could not fulfil except love; I liked.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This speaks about love and living together, they think they also loved each other in heaven, they came on earth to live together in love, though all needs could not fulfil except love; I liked.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you. We are create in god's image, that is what is written. How many lifetimes have we lived and loved on earth? Just something to sweeten the imagination. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great love story told in poetry. Love that lasts is rare. You're lucky to have it. This is a great contest entry and will do well. Good luck. I hope you win.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This is a great love story told in poetry. Love that lasts is rare. You're lucky to have it. This is a great contest entry and will do well. Good luck. I hope you win.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Thomas. As long as I can bring a smile into one's heart, that rates me higher than anyone. :)
