An acceptance
The new world15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is an excellent and great poem you have penned. This is a very good story in a poem. You told a story of getting to where you are today. You told of coming by ship and being a migrant. It is true we all seem to be related in some sort of way. It is truly hard to point fingers at anybody anymore. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. A well deserved six stars in my eyes! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Dip, This is an excellent and great poem you have penned. This is a very good story in a poem. You told a story of getting to where you are today. You told of coming by ship and being a migrant. It is true we all seem to be related in some sort of way. It is truly hard to point fingers at anybody anymore. Very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. A well deserved six stars in my eyes! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Teri you really have made my day Thank you so much for the 6 much appreciated.
dip
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Dip, you are so welcome my friend. There are many times you deserve the six stars but I don't have them when I would like to give them. I hope you have a great week my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know those feelings, living in a strange land and trying to integrate with the locals, some accept you and others hate you, but in the end you stay, food for thought here Dip, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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I know those feelings, living in a strange land and trying to integrate with the locals, some accept you and others hate you, but in the end you stay, food for thought here Dip, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Dolly much appreciated as always.
dip
Comment from sandy montgomery
This is an excellent poem. I thought the rhymes were very natural and unforced. The piece has a good rhythm and an even flow. Great message about our common history as members of the human race. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is an excellent poem. I thought the rhymes were very natural and unforced. The piece has a good rhythm and an even flow. Great message about our common history as members of the human race. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much Sandy much appreciated
dip
Comment from June Sargent
You are absolutely right that most of us are migrants. And as such, we should be more accepting of others whose ships just happened to arrive a couple of generations later. Unfortunately, that isn't always the case these days. Thanks, Dip, for sharing your sentiments on a sensitive issue.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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You are absolutely right that most of us are migrants. And as such, we should be more accepting of others whose ships just happened to arrive a couple of generations later. Unfortunately, that isn't always the case these days. Thanks, Dip, for sharing your sentiments on a sensitive issue.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading June much appreciative as always
dip
Comment from jenintorre
An excellent story in a poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the way you wrote it as a type of diary through the years. I loved the rhyme and the ending. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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An excellent story in a poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the way you wrote it as a type of diary through the years. I loved the rhyme and the ending. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Jen and thank you for the six that is greatly appreciated glad you enjoyed the story
dip
Comment from Heather Knight
You deserve six stars because of choosing such an important topic. People quickly forget, even if they were immigrants themselves in the past. Take Trump, for example. His mother and his wife are both immigrants...
Thanks for a great post.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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You deserve six stars because of choosing such an important topic. People quickly forget, even if they were immigrants themselves in the past. Take Trump, for example. His mother and his wife are both immigrants...
Thanks for a great post.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much for the 6 Maria much appreciated
dip
Comment from papa55mike
This is wonderfully written and the point you make so true. We all want acceptance in this world, but many can't find it. I really worried about the direction our country is heading. There's so much hatred.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is wonderfully written and the point you make so true. We all want acceptance in this world, but many can't find it. I really worried about the direction our country is heading. There's so much hatred.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Mike I am glad you concur.
Really appreciate your review
dip
Comment from patcelaw
In my family , we only have to go back to my grandfather who was only eight years old when he was brought to America from Germany. So it is so true we do not have to go back very far. Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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In my family , we only have to go back to my grandfather who was only eight years old when he was brought to America from Germany. So it is so true we do not have to go back very far. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Pat I am glad you could relate
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, DIP:
You are so right. It's what we teach our children from infancy. I was never taught to mistreat anyone. My parents taught us to love everyone and accept the as they are. Jesus taught that this is the second most important commandment, to love your neighbor as your self.
If the whole world was taught this from infancy and teach it to their own children then the world would be such a better place.
Good poem. It's very encouraging.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Good morning, DIP:
You are so right. It's what we teach our children from infancy. I was never taught to mistreat anyone. My parents taught us to love everyone and accept the as they are. Jesus taught that this is the second most important commandment, to love your neighbor as your self.
If the whole world was taught this from infancy and teach it to their own children then the world would be such a better place.
Good poem. It's very encouraging.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you again Tier. Always appreciate your comments
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
You have really projected yourself into the skin of the immigrants in this, for you, fairly long poem. It is something you and most Americans should never forget -- how recently you were virtually all immigrants in lands sparsely populated by indigenous peoples.
Of course if you go back far enough we were all immigrants one way or another. It is a never ending process.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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You have really projected yourself into the skin of the immigrants in this, for you, fairly long poem. It is something you and most Americans should never forget -- how recently you were virtually all immigrants in lands sparsely populated by indigenous peoples.
Of course if you go back far enough we were all immigrants one way or another. It is a never ending process.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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That's exactly what my intent was. We can't go back too far when we were all immigrants both in my country Australia which has only been settled by white man for 230 years and America. and Christopher Columbus.
thanks as always Panty
dip
