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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A question that can never be answered like the chicken and the egg, for what comes first? An excellent write, perhaps not long enough to call a poem but certainly something to think about well done kind regards Meia x
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A question that can never be answered like the chicken and the egg, for what comes first? An excellent write, perhaps not long enough to call a poem but certainly something to think about well done kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
Short, simple and asks a very good question...can we live up to what God expects from us? Absolutely beautiful painting that you paired with this lovely thought.Thanks for sharing, it certainly makes you think.
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Short, simple and asks a very good question...can we live up to what God expects from us? Absolutely beautiful painting that you paired with this lovely thought.Thanks for sharing, it certainly makes you think.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from JDRBAR
I don't believe anything could be said better than these two simple lines. It takes a lot to impress me as deeply as this has done. Yet, it is a question each of us should ask.
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I don't believe anything could be said better than these two simple lines. It takes a lot to impress me as deeply as this has done. Yet, it is a question each of us should ask.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Wow thank you very much for this inspirational review****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A good question and I doubt it, I am certain that God is disappointed with us and how we behave, we will self destruct given time. Short and sweet your words, your question is as large as life, love Dolly x
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A good question and I doubt it, I am certain that God is disappointed with us and how we behave, we will self destruct given time. Short and sweet your words, your question is as large as life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Earthlover
Interesting little poem. "Born we are as God's creation, can we deliver his expectation?" Very thought provoking question. I guess it's hard to deliver his expectation living as we are in an imperfect state. But someday when all humans are gradually brought back to perfection, through the ransom sacrafice of Gods son, all mankind will truely be able to live up to God's expectation. Please see my poem entitled..."Peek into Earths future" for a glimpse of this awesome future that awaits us.
I really enjoyed this poem.
Sincerely,
Earthlover
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Interesting little poem. "Born we are as God's creation, can we deliver his expectation?" Very thought provoking question. I guess it's hard to deliver his expectation living as we are in an imperfect state. But someday when all humans are gradually brought back to perfection, through the ransom sacrafice of Gods son, all mankind will truely be able to live up to God's expectation. Please see my poem entitled..."Peek into Earths future" for a glimpse of this awesome future that awaits us.
I really enjoyed this poem.
Sincerely,
Earthlover
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you Earthlover and I will read your poem many thanks****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Good question! But I think we can't deliver His expectation without His help. But thankfully, He is always willing to help from within and from above and through the many members of His great Family!
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Good question! But I think we can't deliver His expectation without His help. But thankfully, He is always willing to help from within and from above and through the many members of His great Family!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I agree with your words****kahpot
Comment from smileycloud
very pertinent questions indeed
Isn't it wonderful that we can say "Yes, yes we can"
Only because of accepting our Lord;-
"Thanks to Jesus Christ our Lord and His sacrifice"
The Son renewed our relationship with the Father
The Father sent The Spirit to indwell His children
blessings
have a smiley day
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very pertinent questions indeed
Isn't it wonderful that we can say "Yes, yes we can"
Only because of accepting our Lord;-
"Thanks to Jesus Christ our Lord and His sacrifice"
The Son renewed our relationship with the Father
The Father sent The Spirit to indwell His children
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from LIJ Red
People who claim God is chattering in their ear can't seem to make up their mind what he wants. Dead infidels. No ham sandwiches. Vestal virgins. Stoned and bloody gays. But they all seem to agree about digging deep and giving freely, preferably tithes.
A thought-provoking couplet. Looks fine to me.
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People who claim God is chattering in their ear can't seem to make up their mind what he wants. Dead infidels. No ham sandwiches. Vestal virgins. Stoned and bloody gays. But they all seem to agree about digging deep and giving freely, preferably tithes.
A thought-provoking couplet. Looks fine to me.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A question", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Each line is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me this is a definite six.
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"A question", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Each line is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me this is a definite six.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Wow thank you for this very encouraging and inspirational review****kahpot
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kahpot, my pen-pushing friend, as always, you're very welcome.
Best wishes, take care, and bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from mermaids
Love your short poem that challenges the reader. We can deliver His expectation if we work at it. Peace and helping each other is possible in today's world if we only would give it a try.
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Love your short poem that challenges the reader. We can deliver His expectation if we work at it. Peace and helping each other is possible in today's world if we only would give it a try.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes try we must****kahpot
