From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "The Twists and Turns of Life"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Spitfire
This is indeed the way to look at horrific weather that can't be controlled. This is a time when people question God's goodness, but Nature's twists and turns are another way of testing our faith. Well done, Vance.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is indeed the way to look at horrific weather that can't be controlled. This is a time when people question God's goodness, but Nature's twists and turns are another way of testing our faith. Well done, Vance.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much dear one! It is always delightful, heartwarming, and inspirational to hear from you...especially when you deliver your wonderful reviews stars and thoughts! Love and hugs always! Vance
Comment from kahpot
You have certainly told us of what Gods intentions were and I thoroughly agree we must appreciate what he has given and provided for us and it is up to us to step up and make the best of his generosity not expect God to do everything very well done an excellent read****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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You have certainly told us of what Gods intentions were and I thoroughly agree we must appreciate what he has given and provided for us and it is up to us to step up and make the best of his generosity not expect God to do everything very well done an excellent read****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Kapot, for this fine and uplifting review. I am sincerely delighted that you enjoyed this and hope to be able to keep you interested in my works. I shall also come around and visit you as well. Many thanks again! Vance
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written and composed Vance. The successes and failures in my life have both served to shape me. The failures and trials have shaped my character, and caused perseverance to carry me on my journey, the successes to show me I'm not bereft of love, but really both have served to reveal God's concern for me. Well done Vance, superb work of poetic art and a tribute to you knowledge of God, bless you dear brother, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Beautifully written and composed Vance. The successes and failures in my life have both served to shape me. The failures and trials have shaped my character, and caused perseverance to carry me on my journey, the successes to show me I'm not bereft of love, but really both have served to reveal God's concern for me. Well done Vance, superb work of poetic art and a tribute to you knowledge of God, bless you dear brother, Roy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Dearest Roy! I wrote you a long reply several hours ago along with fifteen more replies on this post. I bumped the keyboard and all vanished and I could not recover them so I'm gonna give it another try. First of all, you are honestly an inspiration to me! Your outstanding and sincere expressions of GRATITUDE AND LOVE of GOD cannot be questioned for honesty, sincerity, and commitment to share for the good of others. I have prayed to GOD to give me HIS help in doing the same and making my writing have power and influence on the folks who read them, and leading them to stronger faith, GRATITUDE, and positive works in their lives. My last post was an answer to that prayer....immediately! I have fifteen positive replies to answer and then will go to bed and pray for another visit from our heavenly father! Once again, I will also express my GRATITUDE for YOU being in my life! Blessings and LOVE ALWAYS! Vance
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You are always a blessing dear brother. In Christ's love a devotion, YBIC, Roy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Vance, this is wonderful! My favorite part of this beautiful message you impart in your lovely poem, though, is that we must renew our surrender each and every day: "Bring your heart and mind each night and day". Well done!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Oh Vance, this is wonderful! My favorite part of this beautiful message you impart in your lovely poem, though, is that we must renew our surrender each and every day: "Bring your heart and mind each night and day". Well done!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Oh, thank you so very much Dawn, for this lovely review! It is always a joy to hear from you in both your works and your wonderful reviews too. Blessings always, Vance
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You're very welcome. Blessings to you too, Vance. :)
Comment from GracieAnn
Hello.
I've been away for some time and was pleased to read this God-honoring write that is full of Truth and gives rational direction as to why we have trials and pain in this earthly life. What inspiring praise you have offered. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Hello.
I've been away for some time and was pleased to read this God-honoring write that is full of Truth and gives rational direction as to why we have trials and pain in this earthly life. What inspiring praise you have offered. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Gracie Ann, for your lovely review and stars! I'm truly honored and always love to hear from you in both, your works and you reviews. Blessings always! Vance
Comment from doggymad
This work speaks volumes to me my friend. It is very hard to even begin to look at His plan when you are dealing with day to day problems.
It is as you say you have to take time out each day to thank God for the fact that we have lived another day which without his willing it, we could not do
love and hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This work speaks volumes to me my friend. It is very hard to even begin to look at His plan when you are dealing with day to day problems.
It is as you say you have to take time out each day to thank God for the fact that we have lived another day which without his willing it, we could not do
love and hugs
Freda
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Freda! your words and thoughts are ALWAYS A GIFT! love and HUGS. Vance
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse poem reminds us the being grateful for what we have should be the emotion most felt. All the negative emotions bring only harm to all people giving and receiving these feelings. Life will have its hardships but faith gives the strength to see it through. I like the metaphor of weather with human hardship.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This free verse poem reminds us the being grateful for what we have should be the emotion most felt. All the negative emotions bring only harm to all people giving and receiving these feelings. Life will have its hardships but faith gives the strength to see it through. I like the metaphor of weather with human hardship.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Joan! It is always a treat to hear from you in both your works as well as your always, meaningful reviews. Blessings always. Vance
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Don't mention. We're here to help ourselves and others grow as writers.
Joan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A vety well-written poem about our purpose in life, here on earth. When we sit down and look at our lives we realize each turn and twist that were in our path was meant to be to.make us who we are.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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A vety well-written poem about our purpose in life, here on earth. When we sit down and look at our lives we realize each turn and twist that were in our path was meant to be to.make us who we are.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Sandra, for your lovely review and all the lovely works you always deliver everyday in leading others always to the Lord's words. Blessings always. Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger, Vance.
We all should be secure in the knowledge that we are never alone and that our Heavenly Father always has our backs--regardless of the current storm we might find ourselves in.
For even this shall pass, and the sun will shine again...
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger, Vance.
We all should be secure in the knowledge that we are never alone and that our Heavenly Father always has our backs--regardless of the current storm we might find ourselves in.
For even this shall pass, and the sun will shine again...
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Deano! Always a joy and a gift to hear from you in works and reviews. I really appreciate your thoughts and the stars as well! Blessings always. Vance
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It is always a pleasure, Your Grayness.
~Dean
Comment from rama devi
I love the way you think, dear Vance.
Excellent teachings delivered with clarity and conviction. bit preachy, but in a good way. Not all readers like teaching poems, but those who do will love this. Your keen sense of the music of words makes this sound great read aloud, especially the rhythmic opening stanza. I am not a fan of lists starting with THE, so I suggest just using it once (optional):
The twists and the turns
thorns and limbs
Rocks and ice
Snows and rains
Storms and winds
Shall not be erased
From the days of your life
*Love this message and voicing, in particular (but note one typo too):
The instruments of nature
Within the gardens of GOD
Are not there to stir you(r) fears
But rather to teach you love
Lovely closing advice (note two spags):
Bring your heart and mind each night and day
Plump and rich with sincere GRATITUDE, in prayer(,)
And GOD will fill your mind with the richness of
Truth and understanding of what is meant for you
To create and nurture in(delete IN) your life upon this earth.
My only other suggestion (also optional) is to not use caps on every line. while it is an acceptable style, it does not serve this poem well since so many lines link with enjambment. The flow would be smoother with normal caps. Just my two cents.
I enjoyed the subject matter here. Love your deep faith in it, too - which rings through your poem.
Love and blessings,
rd
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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I love the way you think, dear Vance.
Excellent teachings delivered with clarity and conviction. bit preachy, but in a good way. Not all readers like teaching poems, but those who do will love this. Your keen sense of the music of words makes this sound great read aloud, especially the rhythmic opening stanza. I am not a fan of lists starting with THE, so I suggest just using it once (optional):
The twists and the turns
thorns and limbs
Rocks and ice
Snows and rains
Storms and winds
Shall not be erased
From the days of your life
*Love this message and voicing, in particular (but note one typo too):
The instruments of nature
Within the gardens of GOD
Are not there to stir you(r) fears
But rather to teach you love
Lovely closing advice (note two spags):
Bring your heart and mind each night and day
Plump and rich with sincere GRATITUDE, in prayer(,)
And GOD will fill your mind with the richness of
Truth and understanding of what is meant for you
To create and nurture in(delete IN) your life upon this earth.
My only other suggestion (also optional) is to not use caps on every line. while it is an acceptable style, it does not serve this poem well since so many lines link with enjambment. The flow would be smoother with normal caps. Just my two cents.
I enjoyed the subject matter here. Love your deep faith in it, too - which rings through your poem.
Love and blessings,
rd
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Rama, as you are ...and always Will be...my inspiration! Blessings and LOVE! Vance))))))))))))))))))))))))
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:--))))))))) Yay - such a sweet thing to say. Love and blessings, rd
