Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Nicely worded three line poem for the contest. The lens of loneliness can be very distorting to one's life. Good luck in the contest. Patricia

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your three line poem "Lover's adieu". You followed all the rules for this genre. Just one question - the ' did you put it in the correct place in your title?
All the best
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017

Thanks for reviewing zanya

reply by marybell1 on 16-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Zanya.

I think if any of us manage to get a write out it's worth a 5 star rating. In your piece is is okay but, I am lost on how the last line is the answer to the first two lines or how they relate in any way. It was cool until I got to that last line, then my mind slipped into "SAY WHAT"

Good luck in your contest. You have something worth working with. Take care. xoxo Kiwi

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya