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From out of the Grayness

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Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from royowen
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I sat down and wrote these words,
"I do not care where pathways lead,
I know my God walks by my side.
I do not fear approaching storms --
when God in me the Lord doth bide.
Country's comprise people Dear Vance, Don't let your pride tell you America is better, or has been, than anywhere else, our God loves also the world. Beautiful poem though. Remember God put Triump there! Blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much, Roy, for this great message. I must admit to my frustration with the political garbage being dumped on America these days but will do my best to chill out when it comes to dumping my anger on FS: Blessings! Vance
reply by royowen on 10-Oct-2017
    I know it's tough, there's a very negative force ate work, to undermine the world, "but we are not of this world" dear Vance.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thanks Roy, and you are right to put the heart, mind, and soul focus upon our Lord and dwell on their guidance alone! I shall indeed! Blessings, Vance
reply by royowen on 10-Oct-2017
    Well done dear friend.
Comment from RGstar
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I hear you, Vance. Not much difference from what is going on over here. Power seem not to be able to hear the people, only the sound of their own footsteps.

Don't know where it will all end.

Best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your kind message RG! BTW, where's "over here" for you right now? BTW, I truly LOVE your amazing works! Vance
Comment from doggymad
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A truly inspiring write my dear friend. All those educated people throwing the freedom that was hard won down the drain.

I am not very familiar with American politics, but I know that the current President is being blamed for just about everything. That is the downside of taking over a job that was not done well by his predecessor

love and hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Hi Freda; thanks for the fine message and review and I hope to chill out from here on as it won't change anything. I hope you and the lads are well, and please give them my best ruff's an slobbers! UNCLE VANCE
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem and a great political view point. There are too many who want to prescribe President Trump how to rule America and try to take him out because he have America's wellbeing at heart and not his own agenda like previous leaders.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thank you Sandra, for your wonderful and very generous review. I'm not eager to pull politics into poetry but really frustrated with the raw stupidity that seems to ooze out of every crack in anything politically related these days. We are in such deep doodoo if we cannot agree to work together for the same objectives in serving the people of USA. Thanks for your perspectives. Vance
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Vance;
While I'm not fond of Mr. Trump and I don't believe he is the answer to our problems, I did find your write to be well phrased and powerful. Yes, the same people have held the power for far too long. For some reason, dollars equal power in our Republic.

But, you and I are still okay. There's nothing wrong with being friends with someone who has a differing opinion. We simply need to agree to disagree.

~patty~


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thanks for your candor Patty! Blessings always! Vance
Comment from humpwhistle
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In the interest of full disclosure, Vance, I must confess I'm not a Trump supporter.
But I do believe in the tenets on which America is based.
As much as he promotes those ideals, that's how much support he'll garner from me.

You make a good point: political promises often prove paper thin. As voters, we often get hoodwinked.

I think we both want a safe, secure, prosperous America. Let's hope we get it.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    I could not agree more...Thanks Lee! Vance