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From out of the Grayness

Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Seasons of Shame"
Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from Spitfire
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What you say is so true. The negative energy spouted out by the media feeds the sheep non-stop. I fear we'll have to reach rock bottom before things turn around. And they will, eventually. A new generation may be more enlightened than the present.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    My hope is that the outright, crystal clear, insanity of this era is appropriately noted in history as a deadly gift from the Democrats and their scum spilling members of the Press and Media. It is a damn tough time to get a decent night's sleep! Vance
Comment from kahpot
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WOW!! don't hold back there my Freind, this is a great read, you should convert to a story and get people to read ( listen) as in your portfolio STIMULATE try it with the world, you have words and if you have balls and honesty I will give you a vote, this is excellent****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Wow kahpot! what a great and inspiring message! I've always tried to stimulate and support the generation of 'GRATITUDE' rather than any kind of angst or negativity, but as an American and Veteran, I am truly sick and tired and fired up at what is happing to our wonderful country due to the rotten Crats who will not stand behind our chosen leader who is bent on sweeping their trash out of Washington and bringing positive growth and security to our country. As a poet, my motive is love. As an American, my motive is; GOD BLESS AMERICA! Thanks for your wonderful message. Vance
Comment from Irish Rain
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It is a shame. I wish everyone would just pull together, just for one year. What a difference that would make. Get rid of all the fake news, and act like adults. Great write Mr. Vance, blessings...

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much for this great review and stars! I'm sorry to go negative on FS with harsh dialogs rather than the GRATITUDE I truly want to celebrate, but this madness is simply too difficult and wrong to be able to ignore it. I certainly....sincerely appreciate your kind review and generous stars! Blessings! Vance
reply by Irish Rain on 12-Oct-2017
    I know exactly what you mean!!!
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Vance
What a well written thoughts of what is actually going on
by the media bias, lies, and trash from the downhearted, so me the (other party) to block anything positive for America as a matter of pure spite and hatred for losing the last election

Gert

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you Gert, for another lovely and thoughtful review and generous stars! I'm kind of conflicted on putting my negative emotions onto FS, but so fully captured by the unrighteous crap that is going on in our America! I guess there is no way I can find to try and gather some partners in "wisdom"? so the BS will not continue to fake out the real truth in what's going on as they meld down our magnificent country. I'm really eager to write some delightful, uplifting, and positive poetry. Hang in there dear one! Love! Vance
reply by Gert sherwood on 11-Oct-2017
    You are welcome Vance
    Yes as you said it will be nice when
    write some delightful, uplifting, and positive poetry.

    Gert
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    I shall get to work on that pronto! Vance
reply by Gert sherwood on 11-Oct-2017
    Will be waiting Vance

    Gert
Comment from patcelaw
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I totally agree with your poem. It seems there is going to come a day of reckoning for the main stream media. Instead of building this country, they are trying to tear her down. Patricia

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much Patricia for your kind and generous review. Wonderful to hear from you and I hope to see you again soon! Blessings! Vance
Comment from apky
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I agree with you below, His Grayness.
The whole world used to look up to America. And now...?

America, once proud of standing for the good of all
Is losing its integrity that should never be allowed to fall
The power of greed is seeming ever stronger than integrity
And if we, the people don't do something rather immediately
There shall soon be no more this land of liberty!

So sorry I only have a couple of hours a week to review, lately.
Best,
Apky

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much apky, for your lovely and very generous review! It is sincerely appreciated! Vance
Comment from BOO ghost
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BOO's favorite quatrain: America, once proud of standing for the good of all
Is losing its integrity that should never be allowed to fall
The power of greed is seeming ever stronger than integrity
And if we, the people don't do something rather immediately
There shall soon be no more this land of liberty! BOO-fabulous!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Now that's what I call a POWERFUL and BRILLIANT review! Ah, but then....it's the BOO Ghost, hovering over the FS site and raining gestures of wisdom....only where they truly !
    belong! What a treat!!! My sincere thanks! Vance
reply by BOO ghost on 12-Oct-2017
    I write mostly offline but I know who my friends are, so I graciously donate me gold to me mates.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Vance,
I am sick & tired of the media always focusing on the negative, the sensationalisms, & their own agendas. Even before the POTUS speaks the 'other side' is poised & ready to take apart every statement & put it back together to fit what THEY want. I know ratings is a big part of it too. Why can't we all just let him work without having to deal with all this other 'stuff?'

You did a great job with your poem. I like the end rhymes. Your lines flow smoothly with great & true info. Thank you for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much Jan, for your lovely review and I'm really delighted that my work was not met with political anger but understood ...so far...by only consistently intelligent people...like You! Blessings and thanks always! Vance
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your write is poignant and sometimes I wonder whether it's the Politicians running the country or the press and media! Sometimes we have to give those appointed the chance to do the job, the rest will go down in history, a wise write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much Dolly, for your generous stars and lovely review. I truly appreciate it and it's very encouraging to know there are still some intelligent people out there: ie: You! who see what's going nuts in our world these days. Blessings and thanks! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Bucketlist
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Hello, His Grayness. This is a very powerful post. I have to agree, even though I don't ,like the political backbiting
Your eloquent writing is still intact. There is nothing to suggest your disease is publicly known. Please keep writing,


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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
    Thank you sincerely for this wonderful review and message. I need to check your dog funny posts and get back. Blessings always! Vance
reply by Bucketlist on 10-Oct-2017
    Thanks so much, and you are very welcome
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    Thanks so much, and you are very welcome
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    Thanks so much, and you are very welcome
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reply by Bucketlist on 10-Oct-2017
    Blessings Vance, for your mission.
reply by Bucketlist on 10-Oct-2017
    Take care
reply by Bucketlist on 10-Oct-2017
    Take care