Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a really great story for the I Am Real contest. At first I thought it was about your real family. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. A very enjoyable read my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading, Teri.

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning again, Maria:

I have read the book Matilda and I have seen the movie. It was an interesting story and I remember really enjoying it, watching it with my children. You have written a very creative story from this book and movie. It is a story very well told and written.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017

Thanks so much, Tier.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written story about Mathilda. I was watching the movie a while back and I enjoy your interpretation of her visiting you at your home and your conservation.

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading, Sandra.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Maria, I love the story and the joy of living the fantasy. Quite well written and for a short while it took me from the cares of this world, Many good wishes in the contest. Patricia

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017

Thanks, Patricia. I´m glad it helped you to forget your problems for a while.