Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

You wrote this well Ricky. I am coming to realise that you will never listen to me when I tell you to present your work in a clearer and more regular fashion. But that is just what you do and there is truth in your work and that makes it worthy of praise, well done, stay true to yourself and your love of God love and regards Meia x

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Thanks Mia this reviews coming through a cell phone with no punctuation and grammatical errors all that's why I've been writing lately until I reach stablish my wifi through Verizon but I like to use quotations to emphasize powerful sentences that mean a lot to me the more powerful the poem of course the more the more quotations you will see sorry if that irritates you when you review dr. Ricky

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a creative post. You have a way of bringing up emotion. I thought that was especially true when you wrote about the chubby boy. Very creative as always.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Against thanks Michael you had a chubby boy thing bothered me when my kid was playing the basketball long time ago because he wasn't a great dribbler he wouldn't get much action but he was a shooter though he had a gift when it came to posting that ball right through the hoop I'm now working with his nephew Alex was 8 years old he is much thinner boakye still but he has great for an eight-year-old great handling skills will be a great basketball player once these shootings down talk to Ricky 1024 really coming through cell phone with run-on sentences and grammar errors and no punctuation marks