~ Bright Minds ~
Picture Challenge ... 5-7-520 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the image in line one.
-Children always need the
chance to develop their minds.
-Lines two and three are good
support of that message.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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-Syllable count is good.
-I like the image in line one.
-Children always need the
chance to develop their minds.
-Lines two and three are good
support of that message.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Pam, Thank you for taking the time to review my picture challenge poem. Your comments are appreciated ~DD
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You are welcome, DD.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the picture this challenge. The kids are eager to learn and their future is bright and waiting for them. The key to wisdom is knowledge.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the picture this challenge. The kids are eager to learn and their future is bright and waiting for them. The key to wisdom is knowledge.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you Sandra, for taking the time to review my picture challenge poem. Much appreciated ~DD
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*<*)
= Well chosen words to make a great impact.
= Having been in their place, one can almost know what they're thinking as they do their lesson.
= Nice work.
Cheers, J (*<*)
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Hi (*<*)
= Well chosen words to make a great impact.
= Having been in their place, one can almost know what they're thinking as they do their lesson.
= Nice work.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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J, thank you so much for your review on my PC poem. Much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Picture This challenge. You used very good descriptive wording to go with the picture. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the Picture This challenge. You used very good descriptive wording to go with the picture. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you Teri, for taking the time to review my picture challenge poem. Much appreciated ~DD
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the children are bright minds bound to read their lessons, locked in thoughts as they are in the environment of learning where knowledge is their key to unlock; I liked.
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This speaks the children are bright minds bound to read their lessons, locked in thoughts as they are in the environment of learning where knowledge is their key to unlock; I liked.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Alcreator Litt Dear, thank you for taking the time to read my Picture Challenge poem. Your comments are appreciated and I'm please you liked it. ~DD
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Poems of DD: great message about learning. Knowledge
does hold the key. Education should be for everyone and fun.
Well done. God bless. flylikeaneagle - nancy
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Poems of DD: great message about learning. Knowledge
does hold the key. Education should be for everyone and fun.
Well done. God bless. flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Nancy, Thank you for your fine review and thoughtful comments on my picture challenge poem. Your six stars are very gratefully received. I agree with you. Education is an important aspect and a healthy part of life. All children should be showered with encouragement to learn and have fun in the process. ~DD
Comment from June Sargent
A well written 5-7-5 that met the challenge beautifully. Knowledge is the key and it is up to us to encourage young ones to use it. They are our hope and our future.
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A well written 5-7-5 that met the challenge beautifully. Knowledge is the key and it is up to us to encourage young ones to use it. They are our hope and our future.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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June, Thank you for taking the time to review my picture challenge poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Yes, children are our hope and future. We much learn to encourage and nurture them all. ~DD
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Knowledge truly does hold the key. This is a wonderful 5-7-5 you've penned for the picture challenge. Great job. ~Kerry
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Knowledge truly does hold the key. This is a wonderful 5-7-5 you've penned for the picture challenge. Great job. ~Kerry
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Excuse my tardiness of reply but I have been out out town for a few weeks - but thank you Kerry for your review on my Picture Challenge poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Kind regards ~DD
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Your very welcome. Sorry for the late response, I am very behind as well:))
Comment from BeasPeas
Terrific 5-7-5. You've got that right DD! All kids want to learn as youngsters. Let's keep that going on as they age. Somewhere along the line some kids lose enthusiasm for learning and drop out. My advice--stay in school. Marilyn
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Terrific 5-7-5. You've got that right DD! All kids want to learn as youngsters. Let's keep that going on as they age. Somewhere along the line some kids lose enthusiasm for learning and drop out. My advice--stay in school. Marilyn
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Marilyn, Thank you for taking the time to review my picture challenge poem. Your comments are appreciated. I love that my girls are doing so well in school. I admire their perseverance and enjoyment in many areas of learning. All kids should benefit from education in the world. So many miss out, others aren't encouraged and some throw it away. ~DD
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day DD.
Great work on this short but sweet little piece. The picture is perfect for it and is something that always makes me smile. I love seeing kids learning. May be a childhood thing.
Great work.
Cheers Fez
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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G'day DD.
Great work on this short but sweet little piece. The picture is perfect for it and is something that always makes me smile. I love seeing kids learning. May be a childhood thing.
Great work.
Cheers Fez
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
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Excuse my tardiness of reply but I have been out out town for a few weeks - but thank you Fez for your review on my Picture Challenge poem. Your comments are much appreciated. Kind regards ~DD
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Always welcome, mate.
No need to apologise, I'm still replying from 15th of last month... ouch.
